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Devil'z Trip

March 10, 2010
By VampChick49 BRONZE, Tomball, Texas
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VampChick49 BRONZE, Tomball, Texas
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As I place one foot in front of the other I draw a deep breath walking over the corpses of my family and friends into the waiting arms of death he holds the keys to his heart and mine in one hand and a gun in the other. It’z smoking I look away from the evil grin and glowing red eyes and follow his stare to see Adam falling to the ground. I scream a Furious Bloodthirsty defiant screech, grab the gun from his hand shoot him then myself in the heart. As I am falling to the ground next to Adam I wonder were Eddie and Jake are they hadn’t been killed yet. Just before I hit the floor strong hands catch me, It was Eddie and Jake was lifting Adam over his shoulder as Eddie stands me right side up, Stares at the hole in my chest. Just as Jake pushes Eddie out of the way pulls the Pocket Knife that I alwayz carry, cuts his wrist and holds it to my mouth. Wen I’m done turning I turn over and bite Adam just in time, then Eddie for he is not one of us yet. Finally I turn to death, I bites hit wrist and wit for his transformation to be completed. I will torture him for hurting all my loved ones.

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Taylor A. said...
on Apr. 1 2010 at 12:21 pm
i told caleb and he didnt mind
TiffyLynn SILVER said...
on Apr. 1 2010 at 12:19 pm
TiffyLynn SILVER, Spring, Texas
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When life gives you skittles...throw them at its eyes and yell "TASTE THE RAINBOW!"

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Lol i dont know how dj will react.
Taylor A. said...
on Apr. 1 2010 at 12:18 pm
beast!!!! lol
TiffyLynn SILVER said...
on Apr. 1 2010 at 12:18 pm
TiffyLynn SILVER, Spring, Texas
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When life gives you skittles...throw them at its eyes and yell "TASTE THE RAINBOW!"

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yea i am.. o.O seriously
Taylor A. said...
on Apr. 1 2010 at 12:17 pm
really? wow
VampChick49 BRONZE said...
on Apr. 1 2010 at 12:16 pm
VampChick49 BRONZE, Tomball, Texas
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A day without laughter iz a day wasted!!!!

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no u ain't
TiffyLynn SILVER said...
on Apr. 1 2010 at 12:16 pm
TiffyLynn SILVER, Spring, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
When life gives you skittles...throw them at its eyes and yell "TASTE THE RAINBOW!"

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Taylor o.O lol im bi too. I just havent told DJ yet.
VampChick49 BRONZE said...
on Apr. 1 2010 at 12:16 pm
VampChick49 BRONZE, Tomball, Texas
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i needed to know thiz y?!?

 

VampChick49 BRONZE said...
on Apr. 1 2010 at 12:14 pm
VampChick49 BRONZE, Tomball, Texas
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so any reply to cutz?!?

 

TiffyLynn SILVER said...
on Apr. 1 2010 at 12:13 pm
TiffyLynn SILVER, Spring, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
When life gives you skittles...throw them at its eyes and yell "TASTE THE RAINBOW!"

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lmfaoooo im tireddd now. x]
Raise_Up PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 1 2010 at 11:32 am
Raise_Up PLATINUM, Tomball, Texas
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When i think of you, i end up falling alseep and i dream of you.&lt;-- i wrote that quote <br /> There isnt like looking into your eyes and knowing you will always be there to protect me &lt;3 MADE BY ME ^^i wrote these quotes

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hahah lol...
TiffyLynn SILVER said...
on Apr. 1 2010 at 11:31 am
TiffyLynn SILVER, Spring, Texas
6 articles 0 photos 55 comments

Favorite Quote:
When life gives you skittles...throw them at its eyes and yell &quot;TASTE THE RAINBOW!&quot;

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o.O why wont it let me comment?!
Raise_Up PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 1 2010 at 11:30 am
Raise_Up PLATINUM, Tomball, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
When i think of you, i end up falling alseep and i dream of you.&lt;-- i wrote that quote <br /> There isnt like looking into your eyes and knowing you will always be there to protect me &lt;3 MADE BY ME ^^i wrote these quotes

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Black belt, you can ask My ex Patrick(: i will bring it to school tuesday
Raise_Up PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 1 2010 at 11:29 am
Raise_Up PLATINUM, Tomball, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
When i think of you, i end up falling alseep and i dream of you.&lt;-- i wrote that quote <br /> There isnt like looking into your eyes and knowing you will always be there to protect me &lt;3 MADE BY ME ^^i wrote these quotes

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No i am a effing black belt sister(:
Raise_Up PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 1 2010 at 11:27 am
Raise_Up PLATINUM, Tomball, Texas
21 articles 0 photos 103 comments

Favorite Quote:
When i think of you, i end up falling alseep and i dream of you.&lt;-- i wrote that quote <br /> There isnt like looking into your eyes and knowing you will always be there to protect me &lt;3 MADE BY ME ^^i wrote these quotes

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I AGREE WITH YOU TIFFINAY
TiffyLynn SILVER said...
on Apr. 1 2010 at 10:48 am
TiffyLynn SILVER, Spring, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
When life gives you skittles...throw them at its eyes and yell &quot;TASTE THE RAINBOW!&quot;

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o: I shall hurt you next period!! lol 
VampChick49 BRONZE said...
on Mar. 26 2010 at 12:11 pm
VampChick49 BRONZE, Tomball, Texas
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A day without laughter iz a day wasted!!!!

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dito luv 2 both
VampChick49 BRONZE said...
on Mar. 26 2010 at 12:11 pm
VampChick49 BRONZE, Tomball, Texas
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A day without laughter iz a day wasted!!!!

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thanx dito luve ya

 

TiffyLynn SILVER said...
on Mar. 26 2010 at 11:31 am
TiffyLynn SILVER, Spring, Texas
6 articles 0 photos 55 comments

Favorite Quote:
When life gives you skittles...throw them at its eyes and yell &quot;TASTE THE RAINBOW!&quot;

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its great girly.(: Lol Love ya Allyson!! :D x]

 

Raise_Up PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 26 2010 at 11:29 am
Raise_Up PLATINUM, Tomball, Texas
21 articles 0 photos 103 comments

Favorite Quote:
When i think of you, i end up falling alseep and i dream of you.&lt;-- i wrote that quote <br /> There isnt like looking into your eyes and knowing you will always be there to protect me &lt;3 MADE BY ME ^^i wrote these quotes

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really good:) i love you polar bear<3