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Stunned Silence

April 12, 2023
By 4basich GOLD, Hartland, Wisconsin
4basich GOLD, Hartland, Wisconsin
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“Isn’t the view stunning?”

“It’s like nothing I’ve seen before.”

They lean over the railing. Staring into the distance. 

“Nothing could ruin this moment.”

He kneels down…smiling. He opens a small box with a ring. 

Everyone’s yelling but not in excitement; someone's running, they jump. 

Their screams become fainter until there’s only stunned silence.


The author's comments:

It is a 55 word story.


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