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Alone (part 1)
I stared at the floor, with a disconcerted look in my eyes. All the memories played repeatedly in my mind like a series...of flashbacks.
The rain beat down on my window, a little louder than before. I lifted my gaze towards the dark glazed windows of my bedroom, heavy clouds scattered the sky which now wore a forlorn aura.
My eyes reverted to the cold floor of my bedroom, i could feel the draught as it ruffled beneath my feet.
I shivered.
I turned to my side and now- I lay on my floor perfectly still, curled up.... motionless.
I closed my eyes as the past recollected in my mind.
The tears,were now streaming down my face uncontrollably. I closed my eyes tighter .. and wished.
The realization struck me, and now i felt colder than ever the dark and gloomy atmosphere seemed more transcendent than ever.
All, was lost.No hopes. No dreams..
Now i knew... I was alone
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Hey i really lyk ure piece i cant wait to read yur new version lemme know wen ure done i would love to read it!
keep up the good work girl!
WRITE MORE MORE MORE MORE! ;D
great piece - thoroughly entertaining but it should be longer. fit for an intro though. i like ur writing style and ur feelings were conveyed flawlessly
brilliant!
Thankyouu.
Yup its a preface actually i'd already mentioned it being an introductory passage to a whole story that i was gonna write soon. I havent come up with anything as yet im just working on a mini - novel at the moment.
Thanks for taking the time to read it.
:)
this is a great piece of writing. five out of five definately. though its short so im guessing its a preface yes?
anyway any more stories let me know you have alot of potential.
i love it - good luck
Aww, so, so urgh. Hahaha, There is no other expression I can say describing this peice.
So get rid of "of my bedroom" because you've already mentioned it once. Be careful to show not tell (I do this all the time). I this, I that isn't pleasing to read. There are some typos with the punctuation and capital I :), but overall very vivid.
I could feel the lifeless feeling that you were conveying. Sure, this is short but perfect for a prolougue/intro. I like it; keep it up :)