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Murder Story

January 22, 2010
By AQuietPerson SILVER, Columbus, Pennsylvania
AQuietPerson SILVER, Columbus, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;You have such a unique way with words&quot; <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> -Mrs. Peterson


I watched in pain and disgust as he took his stance in front of my little brother, as he took the castiron pan and swung with all his might. I heard my brother fall to the floor. I watched as the small child whizzed for air my own breathe stuttered. I watched as he throught the pan at the boy and guzzeled more of his beer as he stubbled outta the room. I hurried to the kid's side. I watched him sophicated in my arms. The pan must have knocked out a couple of his ribs and crushed his lungs... I cried, Bye Brother.

The author's comments:
I wrote this when I was upset and it's touching. and I think it's fairly self explanatory.

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on May. 7 2010 at 3:10 pm
psychedelic_wAves, Austin, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Life sucks, but in a beautiful kind of way&quot;~ Axl Rose quote

powerful...............