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Denial

December 11, 2010
By Evaine SILVER, Schulkill Haven, Pennsylvania
Evaine SILVER, Schulkill Haven, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
live a freak, die a legend


tired. so tired. im not drunk. all my friends are fine. why am I the only one full of fire? my fingers, hardly obeying the feeble commands my mind sends. hiccup, burp, yawn. who is this girl? not me. not possible. always the good, responsible one. not my empty bottle. going home now. keys. car. engine. going,. the road speeds by. trees, lights, more trees, house. tired. so tired. would it really matter if I went to sleep now? everything is fine. whispers, soothing, comforting. Sleep, they say. its okay. My dream will protect me. sleeping, crash, pain- quick, my head- liquid, sleepy, so tired. Goodnight… dark. nothing.


The author's comments:
in memory of Chris.

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on Dec. 29 2010 at 3:46 pm
Angel_Mitskano BRONZE, Clifton, New Jersey
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Let me hear all those lonely voices...

Ooops.

:3

Oh well.


Evaine SILVER said...
on Dec. 20 2010 at 9:42 am
Evaine SILVER, Schulkill Haven, Pennsylvania
8 articles 0 photos 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
live a freak, die a legend

thank you! and it would make a better poem.  i only realized that after i hit send. :)

 


on Dec. 14 2010 at 8:27 pm
Angel_Mitskano BRONZE, Clifton, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
Let me hear all those lonely voices...

This is awsome!!

But I think this would be cooler if it was a poem. :3

Just a suggestion. I really liked this though!