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Was I Ready?

April 19, 2014
By ShadowMMoon SILVER, Atlanta, Georgia
ShadowMMoon SILVER, Atlanta, Georgia
8 articles 0 photos 1 comment

9 months in here. I hear the blood rush past me and feel the warmth from each heartbeat. The one I call mother puts her hand on her stomach, I kick to let her know I’m ready. Another kick and I break it, water drains from beneath me and she freaks knowing I’m her first. She yells, calling my father, he runs for the preparations for me. The pressure increases, the walls get tighter and I’m getting claustrophobic. It gets bouncy, really bouncy, and then smoothens out and the noise raises with voices I don’t recognize. The voices soon dim down to two that I recognize and three that I don’t. My mother tenses then I hear one word before I move down. A loud ringing is still in my ears, for my mother won’t quiet down. In between the noises, thoughts race through my mind, am I ready to be born into a world of fools? Will I stay alive? Moving closer and closer I feel a chill, first from the air then from a touch, am I out? A blinding light and a shock of pain with my first breath. I open my eyes to see my mother still in pain. I didn’t realize I wasn’t alone in there.



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on Dec. 11 2014 at 9:58 am
ShadowMMoon SILVER, Atlanta, Georgia
8 articles 0 photos 1 comment
Sorry for the very late reply i got the inspiration from my own experience trying to have a baby but also my sister who already went through child birth and i was in the room with her.

sunshine said...
on Apr. 25 2014 at 9:39 pm
i love the creative perseption of the baby and the imegery. Cant wait to see what else you write.

Sunshine said...
on Apr. 25 2014 at 3:05 pm
I love the imegery and the discription. i like how it was straight forward, it was also funny. where did you get the inspiration.