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The Lovers Oath

February 8, 2010
By MeggiePie SILVER, Dingmansferry, Pennsylvania
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In a strange way the feeling was completely new and different, and yet exactly the same as I had remembered it. If that makes any sense? I guess somewhere between the good mornings and starry nights we fell in love, again, and just like the summers in this small town it was humble and sweet and overflowing with generous warmth.

Like a lost wind driven by fate you crossed my path for the second time. Like a four leaf clover I found you, and declare myself lucky. And just like a rose, going through the various stages of beauty our love bloomed, and became more and more vibrant with every passing day.
I ask myself, how could I have ever lived without your smile, how could I? How could I have ever lived without your gentle touch, how could I ? How could I have ever let you slip out of my life the first time, how could I? The truth is, I couldn’t!

© Lauren R., Edmond, OK

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To my love,
You bring so much joy to my life, im just so glad youve come along!
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DustyOfMine BRONZE said...
on Feb. 18 2010 at 3:06 pm
DustyOfMine BRONZE, Cincinnati, Ohio
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&quot;And since I am dead I can take off my head, to recite, Shakespeare in quotations. No animal, nor man, can SCEAM like I can, with the fury of my reciatation.&quot;

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If only there was more!!! It was amazing without being alot of honey in the early morning sweet:)
SassieCassie322 BRONZE said...
on Feb. 17 2010 at 2:37 pm
SassieCassie322 BRONZE, Encino, California
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this is so sweet. i really enjoyed it. i loved your similes, :-)
Jaysean (isthegreat) said...
on Feb. 17 2010 at 1:29 pm
I just loved this article. It really warmed my heart. Of all the writings that i have read in my life, this one is my favorite. The use of similies in the seconds stanza was simply genius. I hope that someday every relationship will be like this one. I could really feel the tone of sincerity. Great job writer
leighfrantz said...
on Feb. 17 2010 at 1:24 pm
this was sweet. i can really tell how much this person was in love with the other person. i could feel that love. the comparisons really helped paint that picture.
wordweaver96 PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 16 2010 at 2:36 pm
wordweaver96 PLATINUM, Winchester, Kentucky
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&quot; It is not our abilities but our choices that show who we truly are. &quot;<br /> Albus Dumbledore<br /> <br /> <br /> See, we really DON&#039;T have anything to fear but fear itself!

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thanks! (to both of u)
MeggiePie SILVER said...
on Feb. 16 2010 at 2:34 pm
MeggiePie SILVER, Dingmansferry, Pennsylvania
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sure id love to take a look
Toe_The_Line SILVER said...
on Feb. 16 2010 at 1:05 pm
Toe_The_Line SILVER, Muscoda, Wisconsin
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&quot;In a field, I am the abscence of field. It&#039;s always been like that. Wherever I am, I am what is missing.&quot; - Mark Strand<br /> &quot;We are reading the story of our lives... we keep turning the pages, hoping for something.&quot; - Mark Strand

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Know that feeling. :)

This was well written indeed! Maybe check out some of my work? I'll be keeping an eye on yours. :)
SmilingFool GOLD said...
on Feb. 15 2010 at 6:12 pm
SmilingFool GOLD, Merrickville, Other
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There is no certainty, only opportunity<br /> - V for Vendetta

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cute, without being TOO sickly sweet
MeggiePie SILVER said...
on Feb. 15 2010 at 5:13 pm
MeggiePie SILVER, Dingmansferry, Pennsylvania
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sure id love too
MeggiePie SILVER said...
on Feb. 15 2010 at 5:12 pm
MeggiePie SILVER, Dingmansferry, Pennsylvania
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thankyou everyone so much, i appreciate any feedback that can make me a better writer. im glad people can enjoy it = ))
DallysGrrl PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 15 2010 at 4:07 pm
DallysGrrl PLATINUM, Middlesex, New Jersey
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Sure, no problem.
wordweaver96 PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 15 2010 at 4:06 pm
wordweaver96 PLATINUM, Winchester, Kentucky
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Favorite Quote:
&quot; It is not our abilities but our choices that show who we truly are. &quot;<br /> Albus Dumbledore<br /> <br /> <br /> See, we really DON&#039;T have anything to fear but fear itself!

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will anybody who sees this look @ my things too? You don't have to, but I'd
appreciate it.
wordweaver96 PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 15 2010 at 4:05 pm
wordweaver96 PLATINUM, Winchester, Kentucky
37 articles 2 photos 254 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot; It is not our abilities but our choices that show who we truly are. &quot;<br /> Albus Dumbledore<br /> <br /> <br /> See, we really DON&#039;T have anything to fear but fear itself!

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I have a quesiton: Will you both look at my work?
wordweaver96 PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 15 2010 at 4:04 pm
wordweaver96 PLATINUM, Winchester, Kentucky
37 articles 2 photos 254 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot; It is not our abilities but our choices that show who we truly are. &quot;<br /> Albus Dumbledore<br /> <br /> <br /> See, we really DON&#039;T have anything to fear but fear itself!

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I love it!
Annabelle7614 said...
on Feb. 15 2010 at 10:28 am
Annabelle7614, Nunyabusiness, Georgia
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This is my favorite personal quote.

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The writing itself is great, but there are a few sentences that were more of a statement than a question, and yet there was a question mark at the end.

But aside from that, this is great writing!
PoetLaureate07 PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 15 2010 at 10:05 am
PoetLaureate07 PLATINUM, Aberdeen, Mississippi
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To love is to risk not being loved in return. To hope is to risk pain. To try is to risk failure, but the greatest hazard in life is to risk nothing..

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Poem or not, its soooo pretty!!! i love it, and everyone can relate to it, and if they cant right now, then they will be able to soon!!! XD
smileyfacesandharts BRONZE said...
on Feb. 11 2010 at 5:35 pm
smileyfacesandharts BRONZE, Albertson, New York
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Sometimes we talk to ourselves, because nobody else will listen.

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osnt this more of a poem? its beautiful none thel ess
DallysGrrl PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 11 2010 at 2:43 pm
DallysGrrl PLATINUM, Middlesex, New Jersey
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Thnx so much!! =-D
MeggiePie SILVER said...
on Feb. 11 2010 at 2:42 pm
MeggiePie SILVER, Dingmansferry, Pennsylvania
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ofcourse, i appreciate all the comments and im always happy to give others feedback in return
DallysGrrl PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 11 2010 at 2:20 pm
DallysGrrl PLATINUM, Middlesex, New Jersey
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Its no problem, it was very good. Heyy, mayB check out some of my work. it was just posted and i would b honored if u commmented. I luv feedback!!