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whooosh!

July 24, 2009
By ashleyt PLATINUM, Midland, Texas
ashleyt PLATINUM, Midland, Texas
22 articles 65 photos 53 comments

The wind presses up against your body, and makes a slight whistling noise. The sound of water splashing filled the room. A piano begins to play as your mind turns. A bell begins to sound. A tear drop rolls down your cheeks. A violin swooshes into sound. You keep turning as you can’t decide where the music is coming from. Your heart beat speeds up. The room you’re in turns blue. You freeze as your arms get chills. Then you awake screaming. It was just a dream. You look around the bed your on is spinning. You freeze in place is this a dream?

The author's comments:
a dream in a dream i had inspired me dearly

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on Aug. 7 2009 at 1:11 am
ashleyt PLATINUM, Midland, Texas
22 articles 65 photos 53 comments
thanks ashleyj.

ashleyj. said...
on Aug. 5 2009 at 4:26 pm
this is very cool you get a rush and then awake to another