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January 3, 2011
By marzapan PLATINUM, Westchester, Pennsylvania
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&quot;do not lead me unto temptation, i can find the way my self&quot; rita brown<br /> &quot;die fish Hitler die&quot; jake: homestuck<br /> &quot;My only friend growing up was a yak.&quot; -Russia (Hetalia)<br /> &quot;Pants are your first priority.&quot; -My friend

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i looked down at the lifeless body on the beach. the water washed against her pale white face, the cut on her face turned the water pink in the moonlight. i walked along the beach, and even though i was walking through the water, my feat did not get wet. my short black hair blew in the wind. the girl on the beach and i had a lot of things in commen, the first thing, was that we are both dead.

© Yisrawayl G., Philadelphia, PA

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marzapan PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 12 2011 at 3:08 pm
marzapan PLATINUM, Westchester, Pennsylvania
48 articles 0 photos 27 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;do not lead me unto temptation, i can find the way my self&quot; rita brown<br /> &quot;die fish Hitler die&quot; jake: homestuck<br /> &quot;My only friend growing up was a yak.&quot; -Russia (Hetalia)<br /> &quot;Pants are your first priority.&quot; -My friend

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well, im glad you read it, thx

 

Dr.Vasilis.W BRONZE said...
on Jan. 11 2011 at 4:34 pm
Dr.Vasilis.W BRONZE, Cambridge, Other
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Favorite Quote:
When your friends begin to flatter you on how young you look, it&#039;s a sure sign you&#039;re getting old.<br /> -MARK TWAIN

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oh yes its a good thing
marzapan PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 10 2011 at 2:52 pm
marzapan PLATINUM, Westchester, Pennsylvania
48 articles 0 photos 27 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;do not lead me unto temptation, i can find the way my self&quot; rita brown<br /> &quot;die fish Hitler die&quot; jake: homestuck<br /> &quot;My only friend growing up was a yak.&quot; -Russia (Hetalia)<br /> &quot;Pants are your first priority.&quot; -My friend

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well, thats a good thing, i think
marzapan PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 10 2011 at 2:52 pm
marzapan PLATINUM, Westchester, Pennsylvania
48 articles 0 photos 27 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;do not lead me unto temptation, i can find the way my self&quot; rita brown<br /> &quot;die fish Hitler die&quot; jake: homestuck<br /> &quot;My only friend growing up was a yak.&quot; -Russia (Hetalia)<br /> &quot;Pants are your first priority.&quot; -My friend

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thx, im glad u liked it
SpecialKay said...
on Jan. 6 2011 at 9:09 am
SpecialKay, West Chester, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Courage is not the absence of fear but rather the judgment that something is more important than fear. The brave may not live forever but the cautious do not live at all.&quot;<br /> <br /> &quot;Never let the fear of striking out keep you from playing the game.&quot;

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Thats very nice! I love the description in the first few senteces.
Dr.Vasilis.W BRONZE said...
on Jan. 6 2011 at 8:21 am
Dr.Vasilis.W BRONZE, Cambridge, Other
2 articles 0 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
When your friends begin to flatter you on how young you look, it&#039;s a sure sign you&#039;re getting old.<br /> -MARK TWAIN

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wow was not expecting that...

thats great