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Scars
INT. ALEX’S BEDROOM - EVENING
 (ALEX POV). A blank open journal lies on the table. A hand
 reaches down and begins to write in it.
 ALEX (V.O.)
 Once upon a time, in the wealthiest
 part of town, there lived a very
 rich man and his wife, who had two
 daughters. The youngest daughter
 was charming, popular and
 exceedingly beautiful.
 Pictures on the wall and desk show a young family, two
 daughters smiling in the front. One with blond hair, one with
 brown. The mirror in front of the desk is covered with a silk
 cloth.
 ALEX (V.O.)
 But the eldest was a creature of
 unimaginable ugliness. Once she had
 been beautiful, but some accident
 in her childhood had given her
 horrible scars, disfiguring her
 forever. The family was so
 distraught that they hid their
 daughter away, and tried to forget
 she even existed.
 More pictures of the same family, older. Except in these
 photos, the blond daughter stands in the center, the brown
 haired daughter is missing.
 ALEX (V.O.)
 And so the daughter grew up, away
 from the eyes of the world, until
 she became a local legend of the
 lower town, The Monster of the-
 An iPhone buzzes next to the journal. The hand drops the pen
 and picks up the phone, opening it. A text reads: “Lotus
 Inn?” The hand types “OK” and sends it.
 Hand rises as the owner stands up, and pulls the silk cloth
 off the mirror revealing ALEX ANDERSON, age 17. Her face
 shows her left profile clearly, the right is mostly covered
 by her long, brown hair. She is very beautiful, with green
 eyes, dressed in a black shirt and jeans.
 Alex pulls the hair from her right side for a second,
 revealing three long, disfiguring scars that run down her
 face, one that reaches up to her forehead, narrowly missing
 her eye. The lowest one extends to her neck.
 She strokes her cheek for a second, expressionless, then
 grabs a brush and combs her hair back in place.
 CUT TO:
 INT. DINNING ROOM
 A veritable feast is set up in the elegant dinning room, the
 four occupants are enjoying the remains of a chocolate
 dessert. MR. ANDERSON, middle aged with greying hair, sits at
 the head of the table in an expensive suit. He takes a sip of
 wine then laughs at a joke from JOHN, age 17, charming,
 handsome, with blond hair and blue eyes and expensively
 dressed.
 John has his arm around his girlfriend, ALICE, age 16. She
 is also blond with blue eyes and very beautiful, dressed in
 an elegant blue silk dress. Mrs. Anderson smiles at them
 both. She is in her late thirties, with blond hair and blue
 eyes as well and in a green cocktail dress.
 From outside the doorway in the shadows, Alex watches them
 for a moment.
 ALEX (V.O.)
 My little sister, Alice, had
 brought her perfect boyfriend home
 to meet the family. Well, most of
 it anyway, I was not to enter the
 dining hall or living room tonight.
 Her boyfriend, John, was all our
 parents looked for in a future sonin-
 law. Rich, and well connected,
 he met every one of their
 expectations with flying colors.
 Alex slips away and hurries down the hall to the back door.
 ALEX (V.O.)
 Please, I knew more about that
 jerk then anyone in there. It’s
 amazing what one can learn when
 keeping their ears open and mouths
 shut.
 Alex opens the back door and slips out.
 CUT TO:
 2.
 INT. THE LOTUS INN-NIGHT
 The Lotus Inn is a simple Chinese restaurant. White walls,
 with a few flags and fans hanging on them, as well as hanging
 paper lanterns. Candles decorate each table.
 TUCK, age 20, slightly overweight with dark spiked hair and
 five ear studs, stands with his back to the bar, polishing
 glasses with a rag. Alex slips onto a stool just as Tuck
 turns around and he jumps, almost dropping a glass.
 TUCK
 Good God Alex! Have you ever
 thought about making noise?
 Alex smiles slightly. Tuck continues to polish the glasses.
 ALEX
 So what’s new on the menu?
 TUCK
 Nothing you’d like. All meat.
 ALEX
 My usual then.
 TUCK
 Sure thing.
 Tuck turns and yells in the direction of the kitchen.
 TUCK (CONT’D)
 Hey Pete! One order of Vegetable
 Chow Fun and spring rolls!
 PETE (O.S.)
 What?
 TUCK
 One order of- F***, I better go get
 back there and tell him.(To Alex)
 you want your Shirley Temple with
 that?
 ALEX
 Do you even need to ask?
 TUCK
 (winks)
 Coming right up darlin’.
 Tuck strides toward the kitchen. Alex looks around the room,
 observing.
 3.
 At a corner table a couple, MR AND MRS. SMITH sit, eating
 from plates of noodles. Mrs. Smith strokes her slightly
 rounded stomach, smiling at her husband. They hold hands.
 The bell over the door chimes and JOSH (20) tall dark and
 handsome, escorts petite LILY (20) inside. The waitress,
 KENDRA (22) comes to escort them to their table. Josh lets
 Lily go first and sneaks a peak at Kendra’s ass.
 Tuck returns with Alex’s Shirley Temple, and she takes a sip.
 Tuck pours himself a water and leans against the bar.
 TUCK (CONT’D)
 So, what’s new with the crowd
 today?
 ALEX
 The Smith’s marriage counseling is
 going well.
 TUCK
 Yes I noticed. Little Smith Junior
 should be coming along in a few
 months.
 ALEX
 So will little Josh junior.
 Tucker sputters on his water.
 TUCK
 What?
 Alex takes another sip of her drink.
 ALEX
 Josh and Lily broke up a few weeks
 ago when she caught him cheating.
 She said they would never get back
 together except here they are
 again. Now normally I would say she
 has some serious issues and thinks
 she can change him, but she’s just
 ordered a bowl of broth. Not soup,
 broth.
 TUCK
 You can hear what they’re saying?
 4.
 ALEX
 I can read lips. She also has a
 package of soda crackers in her
 purse. She’s going through morning
 sickness. Considering her father is
 chief of police, they should be
 having a shotgun wedding in
 about...a week. Before she starts
 showing.
 Tuck runs his hand through his hair.
 TUCK
 Anything else?
 ALEX
 Kendra just got dumped by her
 fiance. She’s not wearing her ring
 anymore.
 Tuck glances at Kendra, she plays with a non-existent ring on
 the fourth finger of her left hand.
 TUCK
 Nope, you’re wrong. She said the
 stone fell out, she went to get it
 fixed.
 ALEX
 People with broken rings don’t
 carry wads of used tissues in
 their pockets. She’s been crying. A
 lot.
 TUCK
 Wow. That was-
 ALEX
 I wasn’t done yet. Let’s talk about
 you.
 Tuck nervously takes a sip of water.
 TUCK
 Me? What’s to talk about?
 ALEX
 Who’s the new girl?
 Tuck sputters and chokes, hacking liquid out of his lungs.
 Alex calmly takes another sip and hands him a napkin as he
 resurfaces from behind the counter.
 5.
 TUCK
 Thanks....How did you know?
 ALEX
 You’re wearing cologne. Excessive
 amounts. I actually feel like I’m
 drowning in it. You’ve also got a
 nice shirt on for once. Usually you
 wear some geek t-shirt with aliens
 on it or weird facts about physics.
 You also put two cherries in my
 drink when you know I hate these
 artificial things.
 Alex pulls them out and puts them on her napkin.
 ALEX (CONT’D)
 And if that wasn’t enough clues
 that you’re not in your right mind,
 you also gave Jerry the good china.
 Alex nods to Jerry (70) long beard, ragged clothing sitting
 farther along the bar.
 TUCK
 What? S***!
 Tuck runs toward Jerry and hurridly pours the tea in front of
 Jerry into a plastic cup, replacing it next to him. He
 quickly takes the plate to the bar and scrapes the food onto
 a plastic plate as well.
 ALEX (V.O.)
 Jerry the Junky was somewhat of a
 local character. Though not
 actually a junky, he did have
 issues, like suddenly throwing
 things across the room as if they
 were on fire.
 Kendra has returned to Josh and Lily’s table, food on a tray.
 She hands the broth to Lily with a smile. Josh takes a quick
 peak down her shirt as she leans over the table. He purposely
 drops his napkin and tries to get a look up her skirt as he
 picks it up.
 Jerry snatches up his plastic cup and hurls it at Josh with a
 war whoop. The tea drenches Josh and he sits up suddenly,
 banging his head on the table, cursing.
 JOSH
 F***, Jerry, I’m going to kill you!
 6.
 Lily puts her hand on Josh’s arm, coaxing him to sit back
 down.
 ALEX (V.O.)
 Sometimes I think Jerry knows
 perfectly well what he’s doing.
 Tuck rejoins Alex, setting her food in front of her.
 TUCK
 That was close.
 ALEX
 So who’s the girl?
 TUCK
 You don’t know her. Her name’s
 Elena. She’s in my community art
 class.
 Alex rolls her eyes. And chews down a spring roll.
 Swallowing, she ticks the list off on her fingers.
 ALEX
 She’s a history major, you’ve had a
 crush on her since December, her
 favorite color is scarlet and she
 wants to be a politician and have
 four kids and a dog. She was
 previously dating the guy who just
 got beaned with the cup of Earl
 Grey. Honestly, you’d think after
 the flaming ka-bobs incident Josh
 would learn not to come here while
 Jerry is around.
 Alex glances at Josh. Lily is cooing and she cleans him off
 with paper napkins. She turns back to Tuck.
 ALEX (CONT’D)
 You caught her on the rebound last
 week and you’ll be meeting her
 around eight, hopefully to take
 your relationship to the next
 level.
 TUCK
 How-
 ALEX
 You shift get’s out at 7:30 every
 night and it only takes twenty
 minutes to drive to her house.
 7.
 TUCK
 But-
 ALEX
 You’ve also got a co**om pack stuck
 in your back pocket. You might want
 to tuck that in, in case someone
 notices.
 Tuck reaches back to obey.
 ALEX (CONT’D)
 On the other hand, it probably
 doesn’t matter, most people don’t
 notice what I do. Would you like to
 know her measurements?
 TUCK
 No thanks.
 ALEX
 Suit yourself. Could I get one of
 your almond cookies with this?
 Tuck hurries off to the kitchen. Alex starts to take a bite
 then sighs and puts down her fork.
 ALEX (CONT’D)
 Please, sit down Kendra, I’m sure
 Tuck won’t mind you take a break.
 Kendra drops into the seat next to Alex and looks at her
 curiously.
 ALEX (CONT’D)
 I knew you were there because your
 sinuses are clogged from crying. As
 to your predicament, forget your
 fiance, he’s not worth it. Go and
 date Pete already.
 KENDRA
 Pete?
 ALEX
 Yes Pete. The guy who held your
 hand at Horror Fest 3, that guy who
 comforted you after your first
 boyfriend dumped you, the one who
 held your hair when you were
 puking your guts out after you got
 drunk for the first and only time.
 The same guy who's been head
 8.
 (MORE)
 over heels in love with you since
 sixth grade. That Pete.
 Alex glances at Kendra. Kendra stares straight ahead, running
 her hand over her fourth finger again. Alex sighs and pushes
 her plate away.
 ALEX (CONT’D)
 Look, the only reason his not here
 now is because you feel to
 humiliated to tell anyone. If
 he knew he would either be here
 comforting you, or out smashing
 Keith’s perfect face.
 Alex smooths her hair over her scarred cheek. Kendra shakes
 her head.
 KENDRA
 No. That’s can’t be right. Pete-
 Pete and I are just friends! He
 can’t be in love with me!
 ALEX
 When you had your car accident last
 month and you were panicking by the
 side of the road, who did you call?
 KENDRA
 Pete.
 ALEX
 Why?
 KENDRA
 Because-well because he’s always
 been there for me.
 ALEX
 But wouldn’t most people call their
 fiance?
 Kendra opens her mouth, then closes it again.
 ALEX (CONT’D)
 I don’t think he just loves you. I
 think you love him. Hey Tuck! Can I
 get that cookie to go?
 TUCK (O.S.)
 Sure thing!
 Alex whispers in Kendra’s ear.
 9.
 ALEX (CONT'D)
 ALEX
 Think about it.
 Tuck comes from the kitchen and gives Alex a small plastic
 bag.
 TUCK
 Here you go, hot from the oven.
 ALEX
 Thanks Tuck. Enjoy your date.
 Alex slips out the door. Tuck picks up a rag and starts to
 mop the counter. Josh and Lily stand up from their table,
 holding hands.
 JOSH
 Everyone, I would like to make an
 announcment...Lily and I are
 getting married!
 Tuck glances at the door where Alex just left shaking his
 head with a smile. Applause greets them from the other people
 in the restaurant. Except Jerry. He throws the last of his
 plate at Josh, hitting him in the chest.
 JOSH (CONT’D)
 Goddamit Jerry! Will you cut that
 out!
 CUT TO:
 INT. ANDERSON LIVING ROOM
 Alice and John sit on the couch, making out. Alice giggles as
 John kisses her lightly on the neck. All freeze as Alex walks
 into the room. Alex is the first to recover.
 ALEX
 Pardon me, I thought the party was
 over.
 ALICE
 Obviously, not.
 Alex smiles and ignores Alice.
 ALEX
 Hello John, how’s your aunt?
 John swallows and fiddles with his tie.
 10.
 JOHN
 She fell into a coma last night.
 ALEX
 Shame, that’s too bad. Maybe you
 should go home and see if there’s
 any news?
 John stands quickly, grabbing his suit jacket on the back of
 the couch.
 JOHN
 I was just about to go check.
 Alice follows him, clinging to his arm.
 ALICE
 John, baby, wait, I’ll go with you.
 She flashes Alex a dirty look as she and John leave the room.
 In response Alex pulls her hair out of her face. Alice
 flinches, and looks away.
 Alex watches them leave.
 ALEX (V.O.)
 I knew why John’s aunt was in a
 coma, John’s father had put her
 there in attempt to get her half of
 the trust fund. Just like I know so
 many secrets of the people around
 me.
 She goes to the window and looks out. John is helping Alice
 into his car.
 CUT TO:
 EXT. DRIVEWAY
 John glances up at the sillouete in the window watching him.
 ALEX (V.O.)
 Maybe it wasn’t fair that I knew
 so much about them and they nothing
 about me, but that’s the way it
 was, and still is.
 John gets in the car and drives away.
 CUT TO:
 11.
 INT. PETE’S APARTMENT
 PETE (24) sits at his desk studying. There is a knock and he
 rises to open it. Kendra stands on the porch.
 KENDRA
 Hi Pete, IPETE
 What’s wrong?
 Kendra shakes her head and throws herself in his arms. Alex’s
 V.O. continues as Pete holds Kenda gently, patting her as she
 sobs.
 ALEX (V.O.)
 I was a local legend. I had heard
 people talk about me in hushed
 voices. The monster of the higher
 houses. A wicked ugly daughter who
 watched the people below, cursing
 them with her
 every breath. Alexandra Anderson.
 It’s amazing what people think up
 when you’re different.
 CUT TO:
 INT. ALEX’S BEDROOM-NIGHT
 Alex collapses on her bed and stares at the ceiling.
 ALEX (V.O.)
 Maybe things would be different if
 people knew who the real monster of
 the heights was.
 CUT TO:
 EXT. A GRASSY BACKYARD-FLASHBACK-DAY
 P.O.V Trees sway in the breeze over head. Muted laughter can
 be heard.
 Two sets of hands hold dolls, playing with them.
 LITTLE GIRL (O.C.)
 I’m the prettiest one
 LITTLE GIRL 2 (O.C.)
 No I am!
 12.
 Muted screams, and a broken bottle flies into the camera, a
 spirt of red flies.
 A little girl with blond hair and blue eyes comes into frame
 as the vision is suddenly jerked up
 LITTLE GIRL 2 (CONT’D)
 Now I’m the prettiest one.
 CUT TO:
 INT. ALEX’S BEDROOM-NIGHT
 Alex sits up quickly in bed breathing hard. She rubs her
 hands over her eyes and collapses back onto her pillow.
 On her bedside table is a picture of the family together,
 Alex stands out with her brown hair, she stands next to
 Alice, the same girl from her dream.
 FADE TO BLACK:
 THE END

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