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i solved a murder

March 7, 2013
By Auleciaingram BRONZE, Inver Grove Heights, Minnesota
Auleciaingram BRONZE, Inver Grove Heights, Minnesota
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I SOLVED A MURDER


“Valencia get up”-mom said”
“ugh why it’s a Saturday” –Valencia says”
“then I’m just gonna half to call Mel and tell her your not gonna
make it to the movies”-mom said
“oh I’m up , I’m up I say falling out of my bed, it was just like a normal day I did my daily routine like always, I went downstairs and took my mothers orange juice she chuckled at me saying how adorable I am while grabbing my cheeks softly, I kissed my mothers cheeked and told her goodbye and love you like any other day I would eave and go out just to be with Mel.(flashback return) I sat there on my bed holding the picture of me and my mother like never before I used to always thought I looked ugly in the picture or that the picture was really ugly but ever since my mother has been gone I looked at the picture with such beautifulness. I slowly came out of my thoughts sighing I cried In my hands saying “why…why cant you just take me I say with both my hands in there air, shaking I sighed again just thinking about of tough my life has been since tat day I haven’t eat I haven’t sleep ,I have bearly moved I couldn’t focus right life was a little to tough for me at this moment I just need a moment to rest I think to my self while closing my eyes..*2 hours later* I decided to slowly get up feeling every bone in my body get weak, I grab the edge of my bed to hold me still, I went to the bathroom and made a warm bubble bath. About an hour later I put some sweat pants on and sweater that my mother gave to me for Christmas it was my favorite I touched the bottom of the sweater feeling the texture of the sweater in healing the old scent of my mothers favorite perfume. I walked down the long stair case grabbing my keys off the mini table by the door, I hooped in the car thinking it was just a year ago when my mother bought me my first car for my birthday, I touched the wheel pulling my self up on it I put my key in the engine and pulled out the drive way. I rolled the window a little to get some fresh air I didn’t know where I was driving to but soon as I turn the corner of 1516 Angle blvd my mind slowly started to drift away I kept driving feeling the back of my throat getting dry and I took another turn onto 1596 Jackson Rd I pulled over to the side of the road from the scene. I hopped out of the car, I slowly walked across the street looking both way before I break down crying, I turned around for a quick second pulling myself together . I turned back around to the standing in the middle of road visioning that scene, I walked over to the tree where once my mother had hit I touched the palm tree feeling my mothers energy or presents there with me. I looked down and saw a leaf slowly behind the tree I had blood on it I was scared I didn’t dare to pick it up I walked back to my car and I was slowly making my way to the car something caught the corner of my eye I walked over to the grass and bent down grabbing a pair of hospital gloves out of my purse picking up the watch with my left hand I put in a Ziploc bag feeling a little dizzy of the thought of the watch my mom hated watches witch didn’t make sense why there was a watch here I knew I couldn’t be hers because I remember what she had on that day before she left for work and she didn’t have on a watch I hopped back in the car thinking could this be my mothers killer why haven’t the police spot this when they were at the scene I didn’t know where I was going I was just driving just letting my thoughts flow out I kept questioning myself I notice as I took turned down a famailar road I seen a police station on the left ,I pulled over on the side of the road I sighed turning off the engine I felt my eyes watering I felt my palms itching and sweatting ughh I tried to move but I couldn’t I sighed out of nowhere I screamed my heart out”Ahhhhhhhx3
I cry hard into my hand I didn’t know why I was being like this , was I really for I kept saying I called my grandma and waited she told me to go in which I did but my grandmas voice seemed unsured I sighed and open the double doors to the police station the summit on the door sent shivers down my back because of the coldness I found my way around the building and ask officer I squinted my eyes trying to read them but I was to blurry, he got up and took my hand and said Mason I am officer Mason how can I help you today? “ummm well I have some evidence from the case of Verionca Jones” ohh the officer said “well I will have an officer come out and help you in a second. And the officer disappeared is at their in my seat bouncing my leg up and down shaking just observing the place the only thing I could hope for the best right now I did a quick prayer , the girl officer apporched me she took to the back passing up the people who was taken to jail , I never been here before the lady took me to a room with a another lady typing on a computer I sat in the chair the lady sat next to me and said” well Ms.Valencia I heard you have some evidence that was to do with your mother case, well first me what you have with you.”well I grabbed my purse and took the Ziploc bag out nervously hoping I got something big I gave the lady the bag” she looked at it for a second and said hmm =m I will give this to our evidence lab detector. I will give you call when the results are in okay Valencia” okay thank you I said grabbing my purse heading to the door with a smile on my face . 20 min later I arrived home I walked through the door to see my father on the couch to seem him watching the football game with a couple of his buds. I just sighed and walked up to my room I put my phone on the charger and sat on the bed , I noticed I left the picture of me and mother in Hawaii together on my bed I smiled and started singing the song she used to always sing to me bed “my girl by the temptations I smiled and cried at the same time thinking abput it I just layed my head on the pillow closing my eyes visioning her sitting on my bed patting my legs as she sings to me I finally pulled the covers over my body and as I slowly started to drift off to sleep my phone ringed I looked at the caller ID and saw that it was from officer Mason I answered feeling hands started to shake why cant I I least have one day of sleep were can I sleep in peace but I don’t have sleep to rest I have a mystery to solve I grab the phone from the charger holding it in my hand nervously I click the answer button with y thumb before I missed the call “hello I said “hi Valencia its officer Mason how are you” I’m pretty good I say with a smile I say as I smiled into the phone” well Valencia I have to tell you I think we found your guy” look Valencia I’m gonna need you to come to the station tomorrow at 10 “yea okay I will be there I say “ before I hunged the phone I did it again I put the phone on the charger making my self nice and comfterable in my bed I pulled the covers over my shoulders, closing my eyes ready for a new day(next day 1/15/13) it was 9:45 I got into my car and drove back to the station 20min I arrived I went into the station a little nervous but I got through it officer Mason greeted me through the door he took back to a different room I turned the corner into a room where I saw someone I never wanted see in my life ever again I hated him of course it would be my ex boyfriend Davonetae” I took seat across him he looked at him in disbelief I couldn’t dare to look at him I wanted to grab my chair and hit him with it but I knew it wasn’t right or was gonna make the situation better. The officer took a seat next me pulling some papers out explaining what going on he started pulling out more evidence, pictures davonetae looked at me and said” Valencia I’m really sorry I wasn’t paying attention I wasn’t meant to happened I really didn’t mean to kill your mother I will want your forgiveness please Valencia I’m begging please I looked down at my hand and said I’m sorry but I just cant you took everything from me I say while crying you made my life more miserable you always have to be in the way you wanted pay back so bad you just went out and killed my mother I not forgiving you always lied to me I don’t believe I said” officer Mason puts some papers in face and said do you wanna take this too court I shooked my head and said yea I will have him in jail and put away forever I’m getting my mother justice something she probably would of always wanted. THE END



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