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killer Dillan

November 20, 2013
By Anonymous

Chapter one
Once there was family, Joseph and Ashley was the parents. Aaron, Nikki, brayden, and Daniel were the kids. The family loved to sing, dance, and model, gives their cousin Dillan 10,000 dollars. And also make Aaron put on bikini, like when he is asleep they shaved his head and put lipstick, fake nails and a dress and put it on the internet. The next day later their cousin Dillan came to stay with his cousin house for three weeks. As soon has he come to house he realizes that his cousin wife was his girlfriend for 10 years. He didn’t want to say anything about it, so he just kisses everyone on the cheek but mostly to his girlfriend Ashley. Joseph told his kids to help Dillan with his bags and everything he had. But Dillan said no please don’t help I don’t want you to get killed, I mean get hurt. Joseph said ok, and if everyone can leave the room for a moment beside you Dillan. So everyone left the room beside Dillan and timothy.


chapter two
Timothy wanted to know how was his life going, but instead Dillan said let go to the closet so we can talk privately, and timothy said ok. So timothy went into closet first and Dillan got a rope, knife, and a vase and walk into the closet and shut the door. As soon the door closed, Nikki walked right out of his room, so he spy on them, but they weren’t there in the living room. He tried to figure out where they were, and a few second later, he heard glass breaking, and screaming in the closet. So ran to the closet to see what happen, and peek through the door and saw Dillan hitting timothy with a vase and cutting him into pieces, and hanging him up. Nikki ran to his room and locked his door, and started crying and screaming. Then his sister Daniel came knocking on his door, and Nikki opens his door and got her and told her what happen to their dad. Daniel started crying too. And then they heard footstep and peek the through the door and it was Dillan at his door. They hurry up to clear their tears away, and being calm. And then they open the door and Dillan told them it was lunch time, and they said ok.


Chapter three
When they arrive at the kitchen, Ashley was wondering where her husband Joseph was at. Dillan told Ashley that timothy had to go to work and finish up on something. Ashley said, ok and as long as he not late for our special anniversary tonight at 6:00. When lunch was done, the kids stayed in the kitchen to clean the dishes and the mess someone made. When Dillan and Alexis went upstairs to do something, Daniel and Nikki told Aaron and brayden what really happen to their father, they were upset and mad when they finish what happen to him. After they got done cleaning, they try to be sneaky to see what going on. And they heard crying and they ran to his mother room and she was crying because timothy died at work and no body knows what happen to him. When it was time to go to sleep, everyone was in their room fast asleep, and suddenly there was scream in Aaron room, everyone went got up to see to what happen. And they open the door and turn on the lights, Aaron was under in cover, and they pull away the cover and there he was dead, with a knife in his throat, and on his chest. And he had no legs to walk, mom started crying really bad, and called 911, and the ambulances took him to the hospital, he went to the emergency room for two hours. And then the doctor came and told them that he was not with us no more. It everyone but they had to suffer it for awhile, and Nikki went to the restroom to clean his tears and also his cousin Dillan too. When Nikki went to the restroom to clean up, the lights turn off and he heard a sound. And ran to the door but it was locked, and then felt an ax on his back and Nikki fell down with blood all over him. And when the lights went on Nikki saw Dillan right next to him with an ax in his hand. Dillan decided to chop off Nikki head, so he won’t tell anyone who killed him. Once Dillan chop off Nikki head, he opens the door, and left the restroom. When Dillan saw everyone anyone leaving, he goes with them and didn’t ask where Nikki at. When they got home, it was time for bed, so everyone to their room and went to sleep. I went to Ashley room and ask if she wanted to get marry with him. Ashley said ok, and they went to sleep together happy again. When Ashley was asleep, Dillan got out of bed and made the family breakfast. When breakfast was ready, Dillan woke up everyone, so they can eat breakfast. Brayden went to kitchen first before anyone, and he told Dillan what he did to his father. Dillan got mad at him, so he grabs brayden by the hair and put him in the oven. And he got out his swords ready to kill him. When brayden got out of the oven, Dillan started killing him with his sword and made sure he was died by cutting his head, and he heard footstep so he hidden the body in the oven and clean up the blood and pretended that nothing never happen.

Chapter four
When Daniel came down he saw Dillan acting weird he knew something was up. So he tried to play cool and make him spill the beans. Daniel told Dillan where is my brother Brayden and what was that awful smell. Dillan said he farted and cooking onions too. Daniel ran upstair to his room so he can figure out what was really happening and where was everyone at. Then Dillan came and knock on my door, I quickly ran to my closet and pull off the floor so I can find some evidence that would tell me what Dillan is hiding from us. So I went down the hole I made and covered it so Dillan won’t find out I made a hole on the floor. I ended up in the bottom closet of my house. So I look around to see what he hiding, and there was nothing in here. So I decided to leave but then I hear something coming from the ground and I knew that I found something. So I pull each board to see what under there and there it was a huge bag hidden under these woods. I started ripping the bag off and I almost scream because my dad was in the bag. I knew he didn’t leave us. So I quickly ran to the kitchen to see what that awful smell was. I followed the smell so I can know who got killed too, and it landed to me to the oven. I was scared to see what was in there, so I quickly open the oven and it was my brother Brayden in their without a head, I started to cry real loud. I ran upstair to go tell my mom ended up bumping into Dillan, he was mad at me for snooping around. I tried to run away but Dillan gave me pull me into my room and started beating me up and stabbing me too. After he finish me off I couldn’t move or speak because he cut my throat and push me out the window with a rope around my neck and I knew that my mom was going to die so I prayed for her to live. Ten minutes after I was died, Ashley was the last one to killed, so he decided to shut down the power and the water too. When the power and water was off, Ashley got out of the restroom and saw everything off, so she went to the basement and heard something. So she started fast walk and heard a noise close, then she started running and she trip on the floor and saw a shadow and it was Dillan, he had his sword in his hand and he started telling her why did she leave me for him. She told him that he was too crazy and protective. And that she wanted someone that would give her space and love her for anything she does even if she makes mistakes. Dillan got really mad so he started kicking and punching Ashley for leaving for him. After that he started killing her with his swords. Finally Ashley was dead and Dillan was happy that she was dead so he can relax peacefully. Till the next year, Dillan never left the house. He had everything he always wanted even revenge too. Till the next time a family moves into his ex-girlfriend’s house, they should think twice about moving into the murder house.


The End


The author's comments:
i always loved mystery/horror movies and stories too. and it made me write my own horror ovies. i hope everyone loves my first storie, i know i did.

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