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My Life Is Over

October 29, 2014
By noah21 BRONZE, Lewisville, Texas
noah21 BRONZE, Lewisville, Texas
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My Life Is Over
I was driving home from my cousins wedding when I was hit by an 18 wheeler. I hit my head on the window right as the truck hit, the window shattered. Then I spun off the road and into a ditch. I got a knife and cut my seat belt off. I ran to the other side of the car while a woman who stopped to help called the police. When I opened the car door I saw my 3 year old daughter or what was left of her.
When the police came they called for an helicopter to come get my daughter. When it got here they put here on a stretcher and airlifted her to a hospital. I sat on the back of a cop car as the paramedics looked at my head. After they looked me over I called my wife but she did not answer. The police took me back to my house to get the other car and my wife so we could go to the hospital. When we got there I could not believe what I saw. The house was broken into. The cops went into my house with their guns drawn. They came out with no robber but bad news. I could not believe what they told me………. My wife……… she’s dead. I fell to my knees in pain. I started to cry. As a gentle breeze blew in my face I sat there and cried.
That Sunday there was a funeral for my wife and my 3 year old baby girl. I could not look at them anymore so I walked out. I started to cry again and then I knew what I must do. I have to find the man who did this and end him. When the truck hit my car I saw the man. He had a creepy smile on his face. The police came to my house to dust it for prints which they found. I could not believe whose prints they were. My brothers……….. I went to his house with a 12 gage shotgun. He welcomed me in. He asked, “why do you have a shotgun”?
I answered, “For this”. He took a breath, the last one he will ever take. I pulled the trigger of my shotgun, hitting him in the head. One shot, one kill. I left him there to rote. For the next couple days I had lived a weird life. Not knowing what to do.
I was sitting at home watching the Baylor V.S Buckeyes football game I heard a knock on the door. When I answered it 6 cops came barging in and through me on the ground and cuffed me. They told me I was under arrest for killing my brother. Then I was sentenced for 10 years in prison. That’s where I lie to this very day, waiting for them to let me out.


The author's comments:

I wrote this piece becuase i am into crime and investigation. I hope that none of this would ever happen in real life.  

 
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