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Lost in the Nature

May 14, 2015
By OhWatermelon BRONZE, Peachtree City, Georgia
OhWatermelon BRONZE, Peachtree City, Georgia
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It's a bad day, not a bad life.


A deep and dark rays entered the misty wood. Sunlight disappeared into the gloomy wood. Hidden wonders faded into the forest. Crackling branches as I walk through the wood. I walked further into scary wood.



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unholy SILVER said...
on May. 19 2015 at 11:09 am
unholy SILVER, Georgetown, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
life inspires me to live and there's so much meaning to why my heart is beating right now.

Paragraph stories are always something nice to see on Teen Ink and it was great to see you took the effort to attempt one. My suggestion would be to create an extremely vivid identity for your story and vary the vocabulary a bit. Developing a mood for such a small amount of sentences, but diction can make it simple. This story can go great places :)