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6 Hours

January 18, 2016
By Anonymous

Thriller
In a mysterious town somewhere in America, 3 lucky old couples have the chance to be young again, but only for 6 hours. There were 6 people, 3 girls and 3 boys. As they become teens again and they find out they’re in the future. They walk around confused until they just happened to walk past a halloween party. They all decide to go have fun, while they were still young. They party and have fun while meeting new people. But suddenly, they hear a loud scream and the heavy thumps of somebody falling down the stairs. They all crowd around and try to see who it was. They find out that it was one of the 6 people, one of the girls. They all leave the party to avoid being suspicious and try to forget all about their friend who just died. They try to go have fun with only 5 hours left of being young again.

Next they go to a haunted house, in the middle of an empty grassy field. They go inside the mansion and decide to split up, that way they could meet up later and talk about their adventures together. After an hour, they meet up again and realize one of them is missing. They search and search but can’t find him until suddenly they hear the loud thud of somebody’s body hitting the ground. They run outside to see the broken body of one of their friends. They ignore it and leave to try and preserve their youth with only 4 hours left.

With the 4 people remaining, they all agree to go to the beach, where they could relax . They laugh and play in the water, swimming and making jokes, not realizing that one of them was missing. Until they hear the screaming of a young teen girl, out far into the ocean, where no one could reach her. They see the face before it goes down into the water and see that it was one of them. They ignore her, and continue to swim until one of them suggests that they should leave, before time runs out. They turn around and see the dead body of their drowned friend half buried in the sand. They leave her there, not caring about anything but the 3 hours remaining.

They all go out to eat in a small diner near the beach, where their friend died. As their eating, one of the boys decides he needed the bathroom, and gets up and leaves. After an hour of waiting, They get tired and all start looking for him. They check the bathroom and realize he wasn’t in there. The search and search, and when they still couldn’t find him, they start to give up. They look in the kitchen for the last time and find his burned body in the fryer, his face half melted and his skin peeling off. They walk away, and leave the burned boy, realizing that they only had 2 hours left.

With only 2 people remaining, the only couple left, they leave and go to the state fair. With the 2 hours left, they eat food, and see the attractions while the minutes count down. One of them suggests to go on the ferris wheel and so they go, but on different carts. One of them goes on first and doesn’t return. Suddenly, they hear screams from down below, and the girl looks and sees a dead body on the ground. Not even checking, she leaves knowing that it was her friend, her boyfriend, and they only person that was left with her. But now she was alone with only an hour left. She walks around until she passes a park. She sits down and tries to calm herself. She didn’t want to go back to her boring old life, being a senior citizen. Despite all the deaths of her friends, she was happy here. She loved it in the future, she had so much freedom here. As the next hour passes, she sees this figure lurking, creeping in the corner. She decides to get a better view and moves toward it. The figure runs coming full force at her, and she screams as the knife was plunged into her heart just as the last hour was over.



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