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the missing brother/bomb

October 25, 2016
By Jim0613030614 BRONZE, Warsaw, Indiana
Jim0613030614 BRONZE, Warsaw, Indiana
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“Run get out of here” said John. Every one ran out of the building. John is a detective that like to solve mystery. He is a tall, young gentleman, born with brown short hair. John wears a gold cross neckless.  He works for the NYPD of Investigation Department. John has to deactivate a bomb that is place in a bank. John is the only one left in the building. John had to take extra safety precautions. John pulled out his phone he had called the bomb squad.
“Hello?” said the main chief of the bomb squad. 
“There’s a bomb in a bank at 1402 ranch road drive New York City,” said John rushing to deactivate the bomb.
“That bomb looks familiar,” said John.
“Wait what?” said the chief.
“That bomb looks familiar. I have seen it before,” said John.
After John realized that he had recognized the bomb he made up he mind to figure out who had taken it.
It was a rainy day. John was watching the news He heard about a mysterious person was shoplifting at highly dangerous guns and ammunition stores.  
“This person has brown short hair; he wears a gold cross necklace.”  said the news reporter.
“Wait what could it be him?”  said John.
John was wonder what he should do. Should I investigate myself or report to the office?
“You know what I’m going to investigate myself,” said John. 
John went and grabbed his coat and his keys and left to his destination. After John arrived at the location he had investigated the stores the person robbed. John entered to the store he walked to the cashier.
“Excuse me ma’am was there a recent robbery at this location?” said John.
“Yes there has been recent robbery,” said the cashier.  The cashier was a young lady that wears light colored clothes. She has dark brown hear; she has worked for two years.
“Can you describe the robber?” said John.
  “Yea,” said the cashier, “he had brown short hear and he and hears a gold cross neckless.”
“Is it ok if I see the surveillance cameras?”
“Yea,” said the cashier. “right ahead to this room.”
“Josh an investigator is here to look at the recent robbery,” said the cashier.
Josh turns around and greets the investigator. 
“Hello my name is josh nice to meet you in the manager at this store.”
“Hello, my name is John. I work for the NYPD of investigation.
“Oh, ok, good to hear, I was just looking at the recent robbery there was.”
“Is it ok if I look at the video?”
“Yea I’ll rewind the video,” said the manager
John was going to figure out what the situation was going on and who was the robber. John saw the man in the video. He was stealing store property. He was wearing a black coat and had a ski mask, and wore a cross necklace as well. John left the room and had investigated the store.
“Ah found something that might be from the robber. It was a black coat from the robber?” said John.
A business card was in the pocket. The business card leads to the bank. John did not find his brother. It lead John to a bank were a bomb was placed.

“Come I’m right here!” said John.
“I’m on my way,” said the bomb squad. 
“The bomb has ten minutes left until detonation,” said John.
The bomb squad got there two minutes before it exploded. There was two minutes left until detonation. The bomb squad was trying to deactivating the bomb. However, it was two late the bomb had exploited. The bomb squad and John had died.  They were not successful at deactivating the bomb. It all led to the mysterious person that could be John’s brother. Nobody will know.


The author's comments:

this inspierd me by moves and i all ways love to see mysterys 


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