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June 11, 2009
By kapella PLATINUM, Scottsdale, Arizona
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Be optimistic dont you be a grumpy when the road gets bumpy just smile smile smile dont wear a frown its never in style be optimistic and smile! - Anywhere But Here

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Crash into me
make me fall apart
steal my identity
cut out my heart
Rip me to shreds
pulling me down
look into my head
throw me around
Follow me here
as I bleed and I break
listen to my tears
and the sorrow they make
They fall to the ground
and echo through walls
way beyond down
where nobody falls
Come into this place
release my soul
look into my face
and make it go
Follow me, help me
find me inside
help me to be
what I cannot find
Surrounded and seized
broken by fear
drowned and betrayed … please
just release me … from here

© Jennifer W., Superior, CO

The author's comments:
This poem is about feeling lost and confused in this place we call the world. Sometimes life is hard and there are things we don't quite understand but we make it through. Each one of us is strong in our own way and writing is what helps me get through the days. We all have a gift we just haven't realized it yet. We just have to find it. So don't be afraid just accept it and you'll make it through.
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paperflowers said...
on Dec. 2 2010 at 8:09 pm
paperflowers, Imaginary, Indiana
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Amazing! :)
kapella PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 29 2010 at 5:18 pm
kapella PLATINUM, Scottsdale, Arizona
21 articles 0 photos 16 comments

Favorite Quote:
Be optimistic dont you be a grumpy when the road gets bumpy just smile smile smile dont wear a frown its never in style be optimistic and smile! - Anywhere But Here

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omg!!!!!!!!!!! is this who i think it is???????????????? lol tell me who you are!!!!!!!!!!!11
-MidnightAngel- GOLD said...
on Feb. 12 2010 at 2:30 am
-MidnightAngel- GOLD, A Field Of Paper Flowers, California
11 articles 47 photos 110 comments

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"I believe in everything until it's disproved. So I believe in fairies, the myths, dragons. It all exists, even if it's in your mind. Who's to say that dreams and nightmares aren't as real as the here and now?"

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COOL!!!!!!!!!!!! That's exactlly how I feel;-}
rare9v SILVER said...
on Jan. 18 2010 at 10:23 pm
rare9v SILVER, SABANA, Iowa
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"Being happy doesn't mean evrything is perfect. It means you have decided to look beyond imperfections" - told by my sister hehe

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he freaking does not have to release you!!!!!!!! you NEED to release from HIM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! haha that's why u need to hang out with me during lunch bleh ;P
sarahmarie SILVER said...
on Dec. 10 2009 at 9:39 pm
sarahmarie SILVER, Escondido, California
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This is incredible.!
Jesus_Freak_And_Proud_Of_It GOLD said...
on Jun. 30 2009 at 11:56 pm
Jesus_Freak_And_Proud_Of_It GOLD, Harrisburg, North Carolina
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WOW. That was amazing...that's all I have to say.