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Feedback on Agitated Earth

September 23, 2015
By juliiia.z GOLD, Brooklyn, New York
juliiia.z GOLD, Brooklyn, New York
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     A heartwarming article of "Agitated Earth" by Ujjwal Khanai sends a beautiful message to the audience. "Agitated Earth" captures an event that shakes the hearts of others. The narrator, Babu, portrays a breathtaking experience by describing moments through a radio. The radio announcer explains the devastating moments of the city. As the events unfold, an unforgettable truth is realized at the end. This memoir is one that frequently occurs around the world. People should become more aware of what they should do as a result.
      When the writer describes the earthquake, every scene was depicted so realistically and relatable. He effectively "puts" me into each moment with his descriptions. Devastating emotions settles upon me as each identity of the city is being stripped away one at a time. As stated in the memoir, "Gone. Kathmandu is gone. In 50 seconds, 500 years of glory have been reduced to dust and stone, and the identity of this city is gone- lost in nature's vile, vile game." It causes one's heart to drop every time when the earthquake destructs. Therefore, this memoir is recommended to others.



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on Nov. 6 2015 at 10:16 am
Ray--yo PLATINUM, Kathmandu, Other
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Favorite Quote:
God Makes No Mistakes. (Gaga?)
"I have hated the words and I have loved them, and I hope I have made them right." -Liesel Meminger via Markus Zusac, "The Book Thief"

It is really encouraging to know that someone liked my article so much, thank you, @juliiia.z !