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February 16, 2017
By Just$_$nFame BRONZE, Tyngsboro, Massachusetts
Just$_$nFame BRONZE, Tyngsboro, Massachusetts
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“Living Black” by Tiarra R., what really stood out the most to me it was that the poem sound like a rap song which I really liked about it and also the title “Living Black” which really applied to me it just said a lot about the poem.  A quote that I really liked was, “Divided in a system by color and race saying to myself I thought we were all part of the human race.”  This quote I really loved because it as truth in it like we are suppose to be one system not a divid system and that we are all part of the human race no one treats each other fairly we are all divide like the quote says.  This entire poem really connects to my life because I’m also the same race and I have been treated this way and thought the same thing that the author is stating, we are all part of the human race but we still divide each other.



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