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I'll be with you...

July 5, 2009
By tgir85 GOLD, Katy, Texas
tgir85 GOLD, Katy, Texas
13 articles 0 photos 81 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I only put you through that test to see if you would keep the faith or give up..."


She placed her hand softly over mine,running her fingers gently over the skin of my palm. I breathed in slightly, the time was coming...though i wish it wasn't..."Grace...i-" she moved a cool hand to my cheek,"Shh..." she crooned sweetly "...ill be here..." i smiled weakly,turning to face her,my heart breaking with each passing second.Gazing into her captivating hazel eyes i whispered quietly,"I'll miss you..." she placed a warm hand over my chest,lying her head gently into me.I breathed in her scent,hoping it would stay with me the entire time...She looked into my eyes sadly,leaning closer into me she embraced me one last time,our lips intertwining once again,feeling the racing pulse of my heart she smiled and whispered softly while tracing a heart across my chest,"I'll be here..."


The author's comments:
ive tried on several occasion to write a romance novel and this is what i came up with so far,its also inspired by the song "My or is it your? gurdian angel? pleas comment!!!^^

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tgir85 GOLD said...
on Jul. 13 2009 at 11:30 pm
tgir85 GOLD, Katy, Texas
13 articles 0 photos 81 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I only put you through that test to see if you would keep the faith or give up..."

please comment!!! gosh! why does no one comment on my stories dang it!?

tgir85 GOLD said...
on Jul. 13 2009 at 7:01 pm
tgir85 GOLD, Katy, Texas
13 articles 0 photos 81 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I only put you through that test to see if you would keep the faith or give up..."

PLEASE COMMENT!!!