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The Black Hole

May 14, 2010
By Aquafina BRONZE, Lynn Haven, Florida
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Aquafina BRONZE, Lynn Haven, Florida
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And yet, to say the truth, love and reason rarely keep company now-a-days

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It was supposed to be a game but the reality of it all slammed upon.
Before, I promised myself this would not happen again.
I knew it could only lead to worse pain.
He sucked me into his black hole in which he called his heart suffocating me.
At first I wanted to crawl out even if it left me bleeding.
I had no choice though to succumb to his warmth.
He's tried to teach me not to be afraid.
He doesnt understand though, that I cant possibly open my heart again when ive been hurt so much before.
I am afraid...

© Heather W., No., Brunswick, NJ

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katie-cat GOLD said...
on Jun. 2 2010 at 2:29 pm
katie-cat GOLD, McClellandtown, Pennsylvania
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&quot;Look after my heart, I&#039;ve left it with you.&quot;- Edward Cullen<br /> &quot;To love another person is to see the face of God . . .&quot;- Les Miserables<br /> &quot;Don&#039;t say the old lady screamed. Bring her out and let her scream.&quot; - Mark Twain

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This is pretty good.  Slightly scary, but in a suspenseful exciting way.  I'd like to hear more, though.  Good job! :)
MyConstRuctd_IdentiTy SILVER said...
on May. 30 2010 at 1:56 pm
MyConstRuctd_IdentiTy SILVER, Chardon, Ohio
7 articles 56 photos 356 comments

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&quot;One heartbeat.&quot;<br /> <br /> &quot;Our scars remind us of where we&#039;ve been; they don&#039;t dictate where we&#039;re going.&quot; <br /> -SSA David Rossi, Criminal Minds

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Compared to some of my short stuff like this( I haven't posted them yet, so you won't find anything of what I'm talking about), this is AWESOME! I wouldn't have had the mind enough to make this. XD It's AWESOME! XDD
AlexandraVasari PLATINUM said...
on May. 29 2010 at 4:37 pm
AlexandraVasari PLATINUM, Fort Stewart, Georgia
28 articles 4 photos 174 comments

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&quot;Writing songs is super intimate. It&#039;s a bit like getting naked&quot;~ Gwen Stefani

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This is pretty interesting!:) Could you check out some of my stuff?:)
SarClark BRONZE said...
on May. 29 2010 at 4:19 pm
SarClark BRONZE, NC, Connecticut
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I agree with Katelyn (Redhead) and I'm sad this is true. However, it's very brilliantly worded and strongly touching. There are some grammar mistakes, granted, but I liked reading it.
HeatherBee BRONZE said...
on May. 29 2010 at 8:55 am
HeatherBee BRONZE, I Live In, Texas
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Go on and try to tear me down. I will be rising from the ground, like a skyscraper<br /> <br /> Love is louder than the pressure to be perfect

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yuppers, i find this interesting!! :)) i really liked it!! it made me think
once_a_redhead SILVER said...
on May. 29 2010 at 5:31 am
once_a_redhead SILVER, Lady Lake, Florida
9 articles 0 photos 114 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;love is somethin&#039; we all feel even if we don&#039;t know that we do!!&quot;

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interesting!!! i like it though i think u could have draged it out a lil more it seems kinda rushed but other than that good work!!!