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THE BEAST

June 22, 2011
By Tongue_Blep PLATINUM, ????, Ohio
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THIS IS A GREAT THRILL AND IS LEFT OFF IN SUSPENSE. I LOVED WRITING THIS BOOK. THE MAIN CHARACTER OVER CAME HER PROBLEMS ONLY TO GET THEM RIGHT BACK!

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Jhonnytest012 said...
on May. 13 2019 at 9:20 am
Jhonnytest012, Charlottle, North Carolina
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Also it it is pretty good.
Jhonnytest012 said...
on May. 13 2019 at 9:19 am
Jhonnytest012, Charlottle, North Carolina
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WOW
So this is a real vampire story hmm m?
Tongue_Blep PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 7 2014 at 3:20 pm
Tongue_Blep PLATINUM, ????, Ohio
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Aw, thank you! And basically, she's a beast haha xP thank you for reading! ~ Free :)(; 
GhostMatrix SILVER said...
on Apr. 18 2014 at 6:22 pm
GhostMatrix SILVER, Bradenton, Florida
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Live Each Day To The Fullest. -Quote From Somewhere Else-<br /> <br /> I&#039;m Whatever You Want Me To Be - My Quote -

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Was the little girl a Vampire or something?           I like It.           Good Work.             Keep Writing.  
Tongue_Blep PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 5 2014 at 10:21 am
Tongue_Blep PLATINUM, ????, Ohio
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Thanks for posting! And yeah,  I do have a lot of grammatical errors in this story, it was my first, and I also need to work on lengthening my stories XD    ~ Free :)(;
hydes13 said...
on Dec. 15 2013 at 4:23 pm
the story was very interesting..if i say so myself. But, the author of this piece had a few gramatic errors. Once he/she gets more exprienced little or no errors will be there. P.S. It should have been longer.  
Tongue_Blep PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 23 2013 at 4:04 pm
Tongue_Blep PLATINUM, ????, Ohio
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Thanks So much! :D I keep rereading this, and i feel like a wrote it like a little kid! But thank you! :D  ~ Free :)(:
Tongue_Blep PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 23 2012 at 8:36 am
Tongue_Blep PLATINUM, ????, Ohio
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Thank you for reading and commenting! I do really appreciate it! :D   ~Free :)(:
HadiMDK said...
on Jul. 25 2012 at 10:57 pm
HadiMDK, Lkl, Alaska
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Yupp. You hve talent and i can see ur hardwork there. :D 

Nway,sorry bcoz im don't have any story/book to share.Heee i have no talent in this field.So, people like you please dnt waste ur talent~ :)

PEACE :B

Tongue_Blep PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 23 2012 at 5:22 pm
Tongue_Blep PLATINUM, ????, Ohio
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Awww, thanks! :D I just need to work on grammar and lengthning my stories :)

 

~Free :)(:

HadiMDK said...
on Jul. 21 2012 at 5:00 pm
HadiMDK, Lkl, Alaska
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U means sequel ? wow.. that's GREAT ! :D

Nway, wish u good luck for ur work..dnt worri u'll get published~
PEACE :B

Tongue_Blep PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 12 2012 at 1:17 pm
Tongue_Blep PLATINUM, ????, Ohio
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Oh don't worry! I will NEVER stop writing until I get published!!! :D Thanks for for the comments! :D:D I'm working on the sequal now! :)
HadiMDK said...
on Jul. 8 2012 at 10:46 pm
HadiMDK, Lkl, Alaska
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Welcome..! keep going and never stop write,ok?  :)
Tongue_Blep PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 8 2012 at 12:38 pm
Tongue_Blep PLATINUM, ????, Ohio
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Thank you so much! And thanks for reading my story! It's greatly appreciated!

 

~ Free :)(:

HadiMDK said...
on Jul. 8 2012 at 10:37 am
HadiMDK, Lkl, Alaska
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I've read the comments first and i thought it will be bored when the comment said it's like twillight.But personally, it is different. I love its timeline~Really like ur story :D

From beginning story, i already thrilled!

Tongue_Blep PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 26 2012 at 6:47 pm
Tongue_Blep PLATINUM, ????, Ohio
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yeah! I would love to read it!!!! But I have to get off right now! I'm looking forward to reading it!!! :)(:
CountryPopGirl PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 26 2012 at 5:57 pm
CountryPopGirl PLATINUM, Lawrenceville, New Jersey
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&quot;You love someone, you open yourself up to suffering, that&#039;s the sad truth. Maybe they&#039;ll break your heart, maybe you&#039;ll break their heart and never be able to look at yourself in the same way. Those are the risks. The thought of losing so much control over personal happiness is unbearable. That&#039;s the burden. Like wings, they have weight, we feel that weight on our backs, but they are a burden that lifts us. Burdens which allow us to fly...&quot;<br /> -Dr. Jack Hodgins (Bones)

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That's okay. I bet it'll still be good.

By the way, do you think you could read my book: We Are Who We Are. 

It also has a "supernatural" creature. 

The book has "beasts" in it also.

Tongue_Blep PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 26 2012 at 5:05 pm
Tongue_Blep PLATINUM, ????, Ohio
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THANK YOU SOOO MUCH!!!! You made my day!!!! Yeah, and I'm still writing the sequel. Its probably not going to be done for a while because I have SOOO many other stories I have to finish! Thanks for reading and commenting on my stories! :)(:
CountryPopGirl PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 26 2012 at 3:03 pm
CountryPopGirl PLATINUM, Lawrenceville, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;You love someone, you open yourself up to suffering, that&#039;s the sad truth. Maybe they&#039;ll break your heart, maybe you&#039;ll break their heart and never be able to look at yourself in the same way. Those are the risks. The thought of losing so much control over personal happiness is unbearable. That&#039;s the burden. Like wings, they have weight, we feel that weight on our backs, but they are a burden that lifts us. Burdens which allow us to fly...&quot;<br /> -Dr. Jack Hodgins (Bones)

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OMG!!! This was SOOOOO GOOD. I my mind, i imagined the beast as a cross between a werewolf and a vampire. You should TOTALLY make a sequel. Also, I don't know why, but this reminds me of 1 of your other books Problems of a Ten Year Old Girl (probably because I read it before this). Anyway, Both are REALLY GOOD. Keep on writing! :D
Tongue_Blep PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 26 2012 at 2:08 pm
Tongue_Blep PLATINUM, ????, Ohio
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Thank you so much! And I hope you like it! :)(: