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Big city lights, that’s what I want to see someday. Be famous, that’s what I’m going to do. No one will stop me. People will be screaming my name “Kat, Kat, Kat, Kat” Stadiums filled with people just to see me. Like a real big shot. Yeah that’s how imma be. So just sit back and watch me take over the world!!
That's what Kat had in mind until the day she was mysteriously killed. The killer is still on the loose and a man who is believed to be the murderer is about to be tried guilty. Welcome to the life and times of Katrice Santiago, a teenage girl who met a horrible end.
Kayla S.
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Okay, this has a good concept, but I have some criticisms:
1. Please proofread your work. You have misspellings, improper punctuation and errors in grammar.
2. Dialogue goes on a separate line, especially when there is a new speaker. This helps to avoid reader confusion.
3. Don't use double, triple and sometimes quadruple punctuation. "Oh no!!!" is a juvenile way of conveying excitement. If you use your exclamation points sparingly, then you don't need three in a row. The same goes for question marks.
4. Introducing a bunch of names in the beginning is confusing for readers. Make sure that your main character has one name that everyone calls her and/or a nickname her close friends use. The same goes for other characters, but they should really only have one name. This avoids reader confusion.
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