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January 8, 2011
By dyiminikrap BRONZE, Marikina, Other
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Don't talk to me about a man's being able to talk sense; everyone can talk sense. Can he talk nonsense?

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I could write about you until my heart pass out from all these unfolded emotions that I have kept for so long all I want. I could fly you to the moon and even make you kiss the stars with my sonnets. I could cry havoc with all this love I have inside that I have longed to show you.

But all these can't make you love me. So they are nothing but worthless words that will forever remain as such.

... because the one person whom I swore to devote all these words of unending affection to,

does not care.

© Garrett M., Port Angeles, WA

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TheyCallMeSpanky SILVER said...
on Mar. 1 2011 at 12:28 pm
TheyCallMeSpanky SILVER, Foutain Inn, South Carolina
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"Truth is everyone's going to hurt you, you've just gotta learn which ones are worth suffering for." -Bob Marley

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I know where you're coming from!
carlybeth323 BRONZE said...
on Jan. 15 2011 at 12:51 pm
carlybeth323 BRONZE, Zachary, Louisiana
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"When nothing goes right, go left"

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I love this. I can definately relate.
ShelbyMarie93 PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 13 2011 at 3:14 pm
ShelbyMarie93 PLATINUM, Lexington, Nebraska
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&quot;When Death to either shall come -- I pray it be first to me.&quot; ~Robert Bridges<br /> or<br /> &quot;Life is not a jump; it&#039;s a headfirst dive.&quot;<br /> or<br /> &quot;Within you I lose myself; without you I find myself wanting to be lost again.&quot; <br /> <br /> ╔══╗<br /> ╚╗╔╝<br /> ╔╝(&macr;`v&acute;&macr;)<br /> ╚══`.&cedil;.Isaac H.

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I can totally relate to this too. It sucks (complete understatement).

Keep writing, you've got real talent. :)

ottersarah SILVER said...
on Jan. 10 2011 at 2:03 pm
ottersarah SILVER, Maryville, Tennessee
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Everywhere, man blames nature and fate, yet his fate is only the echo of his character and passions, his mistakes and his weaknesses

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This is a beautiful piece. I can definitely relate whole heartedly. Good luck and keep writing ;)