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Hope

April 20, 2009
By dreamer112 GOLD, Burnsville, Minnesota
dreamer112 GOLD, Burnsville, Minnesota
14 articles 1 photo 32 comments

There was one bird, you,
Then two
When hope came.
Time passed, hope left,
And so did you.
I waited alone.
Hope came, and went.
Never staying for long.
But now
You say you may return.
The hope bird has come back.
I am not alone anymore.
I realize that I never was.
I felt sad without you
But now you come with hopeful news.
So I wait with hope
consuming me
and wait
for you
to fly back to me.

The author's comments:
Dedicated to A.

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on Aug. 1 2010 at 3:19 pm
dreamer112 GOLD, Burnsville, Minnesota
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Thanks! :)

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on Aug. 1 2010 at 1:40 pm
_Mags_ SILVER, Somewhere, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
- I stare danger in the face and giggle<br /> - Never argue with an idiot, people might not know the difference<br /> -R.A.P (Retards Attempting Poetry)<br /> -Tip Cologne ryhmes with alone

i love it, and the ending. 5/5

on Jul. 27 2010 at 9:16 am
OfficialApprover PLATINUM, Orefield, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
Grab life by the balls. -Slobberknocker<br /> We cannot change the cards we&#039;re dealt just how we play the hand<br /> Experience is what you get when you didn&#039;t get what you wanted<br /> It&#039;s pretty easy to be smart when you&#039;re parroting smart people<br /> -Randy Pausch

Again, this was very sweet, and I also love the ending, this describes how I felt perfectly--except my best friend didn't come back. :(

on Apr. 25 2010 at 1:53 pm
dreamer112 GOLD, Burnsville, Minnesota
14 articles 1 photo 32 comments
Yeah. :) Thanks again!

on Apr. 22 2010 at 9:24 pm
HeatherBee BRONZE, I Live In, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Go on and try to tear me down. I will be rising from the ground, like a skyscraper<br /> <br /> Love is louder than the pressure to be perfect

oh i think 'pensive' would be a better word? idk u get the picture

on Apr. 22 2010 at 9:22 pm
HeatherBee BRONZE, I Live In, Texas
1 article 0 photos 1979 comments

Favorite Quote:
Go on and try to tear me down. I will be rising from the ground, like a skyscraper<br /> <br /> Love is louder than the pressure to be perfect

that made me all thoughtful! i love the ending!!