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Forever or Never

May 2, 2009
By Abreika GOLD, Suffolk, Virginia
Abreika GOLD, Suffolk, Virginia
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Was it forever you said you would love me.
Was it forever you said you would care.
Was it forever you said you would always be there.

Or did I hear wronge and brought you little pain.

Did you say you would never love me as her.
Did you say you would never leave without her.
Did you say you would never care for me as long as there is a new day.

Or is it the fact that forever and never will always change.



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Tanaa said...
on Mar. 5 2010 at 7:07 pm
Thank you for your postive comment

on May. 22 2009 at 8:24 pm
Inkspired PLATINUM, Whitby, Other
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;If one will scoff at the study of language, how, save in terms of language, will one scoff?&quot; - Mario Pei<br /> &quot;I write for the same reason I breathe - because if I didn&#039;t, I would die.&quot; Isaac Asimov

LOVE IT!! Very true, forever and never are used quite casually these days. You wrote this wonderfully, though the forth line is slightly confusing. GREAT!!