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May 7, 2009
By julian GOLD, Eugene, Oregon
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julian GOLD, Eugene, Oregon
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The goal is not about living forever, the goal is about creating something that can.

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Somedays I feel so empty, so lost,
Alone in an endless universe.
Feeling like no one understands, and nobody's crossed
To where I'm really at.
I try to explain what I feel,
But everyone pushes me away.
I'm left alone and I try to heal,
But it just gets worse.
I can't take it any longer,
Yet I have a choice.
Do I bury my feelings, or push out stronger?
Can I tell the world, and hope that someone understands?
Or do I push it down deeper and try to move on.

© Thomas S., Portville, NY

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Kai17 GOLD said...
on Jul. 21 2011 at 12:00 pm
Kai17 GOLD, Spokane, Washington
17 articles 5 photos 339 comments

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*beepbeep* <br /> &quot;Where to, Miss?&quot; <br /> &quot;To the stars.&quot;

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Some days the same thing happens to me; it's a toss up whether it gets pushed down, or told. :) Love the poem itself, too.
Hazel-daisy GOLD said...
on Jul. 19 2011 at 6:41 pm
Hazel-daisy GOLD, --, Other
19 articles 0 photos 324 comments

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It takes a lot of courage to show your dreams to someone else - Erna Bombeck<br /> <br /> In three words i can sum up everything I&#039;ve learned in life: it goes on -Robert Frost<br /> <br /> Live, Love, Laugh - ______<br /> <br /> Hope, Love, breathe &lt;3 - Me

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i love it! i feel the same :) 5/5
_NoAir_ BRONZE said...
on Apr. 11 2010 at 12:35 pm
_NoAir_ BRONZE, Toronto, Other
4 articles 1 photo 463 comments

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There are as many ways to live as there are people in this world. Each one deserves a closer look.<br /> <br /> <br /> &ndash;Golly (Harriet The Spy)

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Oh wow! Such a passionate poem, Julian! I love the empathy and description you put into this poem in such short words. Keep it up!
nicole11 BRONZE said...
on Nov. 15 2009 at 7:35 pm
nicole11 BRONZE, Onsted, Michigan
1 article 2 photos 13 comments

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Every 60 seconds you spend upset is a minute of happiness you can never get back

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thats an awsome poem. i feal like that all the time. like no one cares and that nobody understands. keep writing
brewcrew#44 SILVER said...
on Sep. 2 2009 at 11:23 am
brewcrew#44 SILVER, Kanab, Utah
7 articles 10 photos 10 comments

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&ldquo;Courage is being scared to death but saddling up anyway&rdquo; <br /> John Wayne

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thats a good poem and if you need to talk im here for you
PK4evr ELITE said...
on Jun. 18 2009 at 3:08 am
PK4evr ELITE, Allen, Texas
105 articles 5 photos 107 comments

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When life gives you lemons, make grape juice, then watch everyone wonder how you did it!

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Beautiful! (mostly kuz it's short, sweet, and to the point.) Good job, and thanks for your comment on my poem :)