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Together
May 23, 2009
Without your firm demand
I gently held your hand
And just like grains of sand
We fell through time together.
On your shoulder I did sit
Deadly afraid of that pit
Without a single candle lit
We survived the storm together.
A leering fork in the road
On my shoulders a heavy load
Why you came not with me is a code
We no longer travel together.
© Amy J., Sebring, OH
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This article has 5 comments.
that was an intresting poem but hey nice rhyming . wich reminds me what my teacher told me that skinny poeple rhym and fat people free verse. wait out of topic anyway i understood what you ment but try diffrent wording next time.try the free verse. good idea though. please comment on mine okay :)
piratequeen said...
on Jun. 5 2009 at 8:46 pm
i like coming back to read your work. more so when i find something new to read. i was so happy when i found this poem. now i love it! its great like all of your other work. keep it up!
DinosoarJen DIAMOND said...
on Jun. 3 2009 at 8:03 pm
Some of the phrasing was a little difficult, but I really liked all your ideas. Your stuff is really good :]
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