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Abandoned

February 7, 2024
By 4Newmane GOLD, Nashotah, Wisconsin
4Newmane GOLD, Nashotah, Wisconsin
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I am proud, yet heartbroken,

     you left me alone, in the dust.

Abandoned, my body aches, 

     sorrow and sadness, fills my bones.

Suddenly, on my doorstep, 

     you were there, holding flowers.


The author's comments:

  This is a Sijo, a Korean form of poetry that consists of 14-16 syllables per line, and is three lines, the lines can each be split in half to create six lines if the lines visually look too long. this is about a loved one leaving to live their dream and everyday I miss him, until one day he comes home.


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