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broken bridge
July 14, 2009
Secrets unsolved.
worlds revolve.
love crashes as i
pick up the ashes.
feel the pain as
our love is stained.
Walk the bridge of
broken wood. I'll take
you to where i once stood.
By your side, i will survive.
breathe your air, i will prepare.
Feel depressed, i can confess,
love burns a hole right through
my chest.
My hearts still pumping, i can hear it thumping.
There's one thing i know that i can declare, that love is true it doesn't have to be fair.
© Peter G., Glenburn, ME
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This article has 6 comments.
Interesting; I like the rhyming. I think that some lines have really good graphic imagery, especially "love is stained." I think instead of saying that you feel depressed, you could instead describe your depression - your face, your feelings, using imagery and/or metaphorical language that the reader can really relate to.
Great job!
Great job!
RadioShower PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 21 2009 at 10:30 pm
Amazing so sad (what is it with you and sad stuff? Just kidding i writ sad all the time!) GO SORROWFUL LOVERS!!!!
Hope_Princess BRONZE said...
on Aug. 20 2009 at 1:53 pm
I absolutely love this poem and it's written in a such a special way all your own. Keep writing!
GlassHeart SILVER said...
on Jul. 29 2009 at 10:54 pm
Good job.
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Favorite Quote:
"you know you're in love because you can't fall asleep, because reality is finally better than your dreams"