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July 18, 2009
By LIKEwhoaa GOLD, Carrollton, Texas
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LIKEwhoaa GOLD, Carrollton, Texas
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The important thing is this: To be able at any moment to sacrifice what we are for what we could become.<br /> -Charles DuBois

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broken and forgotten...closed, and all shut in shut



up
and shut out.

never to return to that one place called my home my room my lovely little alcove


out of the way of the world and the wind...
forgotten and broken

closed down


closed up
or just closed.




you pick. either way...
im still







gone.

© Lauren H., Johnson Creek, WI

The author's comments:
...this one is kinda weird...i decided to pick a picture and write a poem about it...but, i really dont know
<3 peace out my sista brothas
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Duckie430 said...
on Aug. 26 2009 at 2:19 am
Duckie430, Riverside, Rhode Island
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Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;The secret to life is being who you are and being happy with who you are.&rdquo;<br /> &quot;Whatever does not kill you only makes you stronger.&quot;

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very interesting.
carolinesell PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 12 2009 at 4:29 am
carolinesell PLATINUM, Cedar Falls, Iowa
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thanks for commenting on my work!

anyway, i think there is a lot to think about in this poem--i really like it especially because of the way you play with the line breaks (it's one of my favorite things to do!!!)

good job!
SaraB. GOLD said...
on Aug. 6 2009 at 11:44 pm
SaraB. GOLD, Phoenix, Arizona
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&quot;Whatever you are, be a good one&quot; Abraham Lincoln

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that's interesting. I've never tried to pick a picture before writing the poem. I like how the random spacing makes it super free verse, its cool. xD
jennee21_ann GOLD said...
on Aug. 3 2009 at 5:18 pm
jennee21_ann GOLD, Helper, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Don&#039;t gain the world and lose your soul....wisdom is better than silver or gold.&quot; <br /> <br /> &quot;You can always close a book, but you can never close the mind of a writer.&quot;

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hey this is a really great piece. i think it can have a different meaning for everyone. you're really good :) would you mind checking out my work?...i would love your feedback!