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Nothing Left

July 30, 2009
By Nickel BRONZE, Waldorf, Maryland
Nickel BRONZE, Waldorf, Maryland
4 articles 1 photo 4 comments

It was raining outside, so no one could see me cry.
I walked down the street, feeling of defeat.
Last night was the worst night, nothing ever goes right.
I came to the end, the decision was already made.
To the edge, where I go. Close my eyes to let it go.
Turn around
Step back.
One last breath and that's that.
I jump and then fall,
to put a finish to it all.


The author's comments:
I wrote this one day in class for an assignment. I wasn't upset or anything, it kind of just popped into my head. I Also wasn't sure want to call it, because I never really give anything I write a title. But I hope you like it.

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Lonleydandy said...
on Aug. 18 2009 at 5:00 pm
I think it is really good. Even though it has like no emotional thing behind it [according to your "Author's Comments.." I can see it as a poem with great meaning, and thought, and pain. I really like it :]