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Your Kiss

October 29, 2009
By krysten SILVER, Weiser, Idaho
krysten SILVER, Weiser, Idaho
9 articles 0 photos 47 comments

Favorite Quote:
Smile now or smile later, but remember the pain you hide, will only grow greater.<br /> *krysten*


Smile now, smile later,
everyday my pain grows greater.
Please just love me, hold my hand,
love me forever, be my man.
Kiss me gently, stroke my side,
wrap your arms around me, let me hide.
Remember our first kiss, I miss the spark,
I sat on my deck reliving the moment till dark.
Dont forget me, remember my voice love,
till god takes us up above.



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on Jun. 7 2010 at 10:14 am
BiancaMarie SILVER, Colchester, Vermont
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Favorite Quote:
better loved then lost then never to have loved at all

great poem gurly.! you should deff keep wrighting.! never give up your passion.! and most of alll never give up the ones you love.!

my rating=5 star (: great job:D


krysten SILVER said...
on Jun. 5 2010 at 8:59 pm
krysten SILVER, Weiser, Idaho
9 articles 0 photos 47 comments

Favorite Quote:
Smile now or smile later, but remember the pain you hide, will only grow greater.<br /> *krysten*

Thank you for the positive comments! They really make me feel good about my poetry! :)

Louis GOLD said...
on Jun. 5 2010 at 5:06 am
Louis GOLD, Paris, Other
17 articles 0 photos 54 comments

Favorite Quote:
Too much isn&#039;t enough.

This poem is very resemblant to 'Upon my heart' in my opinion. Again, I ove the lulling flow in it. Keep it up!