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Wishing

October 17, 2010
By bluebird SILVER, Sandy Hook, Connecticut
bluebird SILVER, Sandy Hook, Connecticut
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The logic of wishing
Is hard for some to see
Whether you’re wishing on a star
Or a small fish in the sea
Objects can hold wishes
And wishes always hold hope
It helps some get through tough times
And many to cope
Believers, whatever your wishes
Whatever they are
Whether on a random fish
Or on the first star
May your wishes and dreams
Always go far


The author's comments:
Always believe in your wishes; set them on an object and always set them free.

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creich said...
on Dec. 1 2010 at 9:30 pm
Loved it!  The thoughts, the rhymes . . .

on Nov. 28 2010 at 5:15 pm
bluebird SILVER, Sandy Hook, Connecticut
8 articles 0 photos 45 comments
Thank you! I love that part, too. I just love spreading positive messages! I'll check out your work.

MRose911 GOLD said...
on Nov. 16 2010 at 9:41 pm
MRose911 GOLD, Paradise, Utah
17 articles 10 photos 107 comments

Favorite Quote:
"No boy is worth crying over and the one who is won't make you cry." - Sarah Kane

This poem is great! I love the last of the poem and the rhyming to it! :)