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The Zone
December 31, 2011
Sleepless nights, tight nights
Hours awake and no sleep I can bake
To me it’s just a lake
The return of the pale
Every year
I hear the same breeze
I see the same dreams
I feel the same scene
And also the thought is not gone
I know this is low thinking
That someday my mind will blow away
And flow to the north
But it’s okay
Because I’ll be graved in my favourite zone
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artmantist BRONZE said...
on Jan. 31 2012 at 4:12 pm
lol, tnx team, if u want i ll send a description
Zaraclaylime DIAMOND said...
on Jan. 31 2012 at 12:42 pm
didnt understand it, but it sounded pretty
artmantist BRONZE said...
on Jan. 30 2012 at 10:22 pm
tnx, skieler
SkylerMorningstar GOLD said...
on Jan. 30 2012 at 10:21 pm
i liked it
QuietMusician BRONZE said...
on Jan. 29 2012 at 9:46 pm
I like it. It is really peaceful to read :) i
artmantist BRONZE said...
on Jan. 28 2012 at 1:26 pm
tnx, i ll keep it in mind,
rockmafia-611 BRONZE said...
on Jan. 28 2012 at 1:25 pm
it's nice but it could be better.keep on writing :)
artmantist BRONZE said...
on Jan. 28 2012 at 12:57 pm
tnx, really appreciate it
artmantist BRONZE said...
on Jan. 24 2012 at 9:06 pm
tnx, daph, will keep it in mind
For constructive criticism, I would say to watch out for clichés with your next poem. like "sleepless nights." maybe find another way to describe the nights without saying sleepless but implying that these nights went without sleep. it's interesting though. at least the way it ends is interesting. it's another light read :)
artmantist BRONZE said...
on Jan. 22 2012 at 8:26 pm
tnx, glad u liked it
artmantist BRONZE said...
on Jan. 22 2012 at 8:25 pm
tnx, caligirl
artmantist BRONZE said...
on Jan. 22 2012 at 8:24 pm
tnx wonderment, btw i like the word u used ; airy, lol
artmantist BRONZE said...
on Jan. 22 2012 at 8:23 pm
tnx, glad u liked it
artmantist BRONZE said...
on Jan. 22 2012 at 8:22 pm
tnx , 4 the feedback, we ll keep in in mind
artmantist BRONZE said...
on Jan. 22 2012 at 8:21 pm
tnx, glad u liked it
artmantist BRONZE said...
on Jan. 22 2012 at 8:20 pm
tnk u very much, glad u liked it
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