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For those who fall

February 7, 2012
By Brokenness_is_Beautiful SILVER, Independece, Louisiana
Brokenness_is_Beautiful SILVER, Independece, Louisiana
6 articles 3 photos 77 comments

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Life is so ironic to understand fully, it takes sadness to know what is happiness. noise to distinguish silent and a broken heart to find true love.


Day break
Night fall
the in between moments
fate comes to call
leaving us breathless
speechless before all

If it matters at all
don't let it break
hide it from Time's breath
it's the ultimate down fall.
Listen for the call
And wait for the perfect moment.

Fight in that moment
for this and for all
who heard the call
and those who will break
when they do finally fall.
For battle, save your breath.

Breathe for the breathless
In the victorious moment
When your enemies fall
But do you really win at all
witness to the broken
Answer your calling.

Answer those who call
and with them breathe their last breath
Let your heart break
In those sad moment
Mourn for all
Its the beginning of fall

Winter comes after fall
And then Spring follows calling
life back to all
with a single breath.
Rejoice in this moment
for joy fills all breaks.

But in the fall save your breath
To answer Spring's call. Live for those moments
When joy returns and fills all our heart breaks.


The author's comments:
it is a sestine poem- my first.

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on Mar. 9 2012 at 7:46 am
SuNshiNe007 ELITE, Magee Ms., Mississippi
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Never Give Up, And Know That God Will Always Love You!

Thats completely ok, I understand;)

on Mar. 8 2012 at 2:16 pm
Brokenness_is_Beautiful SILVER, Independece, Louisiana
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Life is so ironic to understand fully, it takes sadness to know what is happiness. noise to distinguish silent and a broken heart to find true love.

Okay, I'll look at your work! Thanks sfor all of your comments. I' really sorry I haven't replied to all of your other ones but I haven't been on in a while.

on Mar. 8 2012 at 2:16 pm
Brokenness_is_Beautiful SILVER, Independece, Louisiana
6 articles 3 photos 77 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is so ironic to understand fully, it takes sadness to know what is happiness. noise to distinguish silent and a broken heart to find true love.

Okay, I'll look at your work! Thanks sfor all of your comments. I' really sorry I haven't replied to all of your other ones but I haven't been on in a while.

on Feb. 22 2012 at 9:14 am
SuNshiNe007 ELITE, Magee Ms., Mississippi
120 articles 0 photos 306 comments

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Never Give Up, And Know That God Will Always Love You!

This is amazing! Great job! I love the way you worded it! Your work never loses my attention! Oh, hey could you please check out my new work? The titles are called "Sparks My Love", "Silver Moon", and "Holy Ground".