All Nonfiction
- Bullying
- Books
- Academic
- Author Interviews
- Celebrity interviews
- College Articles
- College Essays
- Educator of the Year
- Heroes
- Interviews
- Memoir
- Personal Experience
- Sports
- Travel & Culture
All Opinions
- Bullying
- Current Events / Politics
- Discrimination
- Drugs / Alcohol / Smoking
- Entertainment / Celebrities
- Environment
- Love / Relationships
- Movies / Music / TV
- Pop Culture / Trends
- School / College
- Social Issues / Civics
- Spirituality / Religion
- Sports / Hobbies
All Hot Topics
- Bullying
- Community Service
- Environment
- Health
- Letters to the Editor
- Pride & Prejudice
- What Matters
- Back
Summer Guide
- Program Links
- Program Reviews
- Back
College Guide
- College Links
- College Reviews
- College Essays
- College Articles
- Back
Love Me for My Imperfections
May 2, 2008
Love me for my imperfections
Love me for my fears
Love me for the selfishness
I display upon my peers
Love me for a little while
Until I break down
Forever is just not my style
Now your whispers to me are much too loud
We have tried now too many times
To rebuild something that's not for our kind
The end is near, time slowly fades
I wish this wasn't true, but people never change
Maybe for a little while I 'd seem so much more different
But maybe for a little while you just refused to listen
Maybe I won't end this with a harsh note
If you try to comprehend everything I wrote
I promise I will try to be sober
This following October.
Mary Dishigrikyan.
Similar Articles
Previous Next
JOIN THE DISCUSSION
This article has 5 comments.
paperrthinnn said...
on Aug. 6 2008 at 6:34 am
You're Awesome!!
lucygoosy said...
on Aug. 6 2008 at 2:25 am
WOWOWOWOWOWOW! i love it!
amazing. and again, congrats. this should win an award or something! keep up the greeeaattt work.
amazing. and again, congrats. this should win an award or something! keep up the greeeaattt work.
ohmagahtaco<3 said...
on Aug. 5 2008 at 7:49 pm
love it
absolutely amazing
your a natural :)
absolutely amazing
your a natural :)
sarah :] said...
on Aug. 5 2008 at 1:49 pm
Wow. I LOVE this poem. Just enough rhyme without making it cheesy. Plus the last lines really HIT you. Good job!
Grannyjill said...
on Aug. 5 2008 at 7:21 am
Lots going for it...
(should be 'before' not 'upon')
Until I break down - is a bit short, needs something else to keep rhythm going.
sober/October is desperate rhyming....change these lines.
But - this is excellent, raw, yes, but there is much to build upon. I congratulate you on a very mature piece of writing. Well, done.
Keep writing
(should be 'before' not 'upon')
Until I break down - is a bit short, needs something else to keep rhythm going.
sober/October is desperate rhyming....change these lines.
But - this is excellent, raw, yes, but there is much to build upon. I congratulate you on a very mature piece of writing. Well, done.
Keep writing
