Check Off List | Teen Ink

Check Off List

December 26, 2012
By LucasLeParkour BRONZE, Rockville, Missouri
LucasLeParkour BRONZE, Rockville, Missouri
3 articles 0 photos 0 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is short, so live it while you can


I have a list, of things to do
One of those things is to be with you

You never escape from my mind
If I'm lost, it's you I try to find

I miss the softness of your lips
And pulling you close by your hips

Your kiss was the best I've ever had
With you I'm happy, without you I'm sad

Everything about you is amazing, be mine
I don't want to be without you, I whine 

All I know is I truly love you
And all I hope is you love me too

I hate that from you I am so far
Promise me you'll think of me, when you look into the stars  


The author's comments:
I wrote this when I was sad, I felt like I may never find the right girl, but I know she's somewhere, thinking of me.

Similar Articles

JOIN THE DISCUSSION

This article has 1 comment.


on Dec. 30 2012 at 9:59 pm
TaylorWintry DIAMOND, Carrollton, Texas
72 articles 0 photos 860 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Never fear shadows. They simply mean there's a light shining somewhere nearby." - Unknown

This is fantastic! Great, great job! Your rhyming is just perfect, and the entirety of the poem has a very slight sense of childishness, but a charming sense of it. It really makes the mood of the piece even more captivating. Great job!!