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Taken

March 8, 2013
By MeaghanViolet BRONZE, Francestown, New Hampshire
MeaghanViolet BRONZE, Francestown, New Hampshire
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't you worry your pretty little mind, people throw rocks at things that shine."


Everything I love gets taken away
From the beginning to this very day.
I thought that you were forever mine.
When I turned and you were gone I said I was fine.

But really me and my heart were left broken.
My life is the carnival you were the token.
I'm not sure where I can go with no pass,
really anywhere, I just can't move to fast.

Without you, where is my life going?
I can't see, cause you stopped the glowing.
You were my shining star,
I can't see, cause you moved too far.

Do you know what it's like to loose everything?
To be dumped in the road for some summer fling?
I truly do not thing that you do.
Cause we're always thing one and you're always thing two.

You had so many fouls in one silly game.
I kept telling myself to push through the pain.
I guess I shouldn't have decided to try,
I should've been the one to start the goodbye's.


The author's comments:
This is about watching someone you trusted, or tried to trust, just walk away. And throw away all of your time and effort.

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on Jun. 16 2014 at 1:49 pm
MeaghanViolet BRONZE, Francestown, New Hampshire
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't you worry your pretty little mind, people throw rocks at things that shine."

Thank you so much, that means a lot! This poem was actually published in a book this fall called "A Celebration Of Poets"

on Nov. 7 2013 at 4:53 pm
*O* I FEEL THE POWER! GREAT JOB! ^-^ I look forward to more of your writings!!!! :D

on Oct. 27 2013 at 5:18 pm
MeaghanViolet BRONZE, Francestown, New Hampshire
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't you worry your pretty little mind, people throw rocks at things that shine."

Thanks, and I'm glad, that's why I write.

on Oct. 27 2013 at 1:43 pm
MariaVasquez SILVER, Wilmington, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;you know you truly love somebody when they hurt you so badly, but all you can think about it is the times when they made you smile&quot;<br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> -anonymous

OMG I CAN REALTE TO THIS...THE POEM IS AWESOME!!!

on Mar. 20 2013 at 4:11 pm
MeaghanViolet BRONZE, Francestown, New Hampshire
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Don&#039;t you worry your pretty little mind, people throw rocks at things that shine.&quot;

That means alot, thank you.

on Mar. 20 2013 at 4:10 pm
MeaghanViolet BRONZE, Francestown, New Hampshire
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Don&#039;t you worry your pretty little mind, people throw rocks at things that shine.&quot;

Thanks, I appreciate it!

on Mar. 20 2013 at 4:10 pm
MeaghanViolet BRONZE, Francestown, New Hampshire
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Don&#039;t you worry your pretty little mind, people throw rocks at things that shine.&quot;

Awh! Glad it did(:

on Mar. 14 2013 at 4:28 pm
trang mae baumann BRONZE, Wilmington, Delaware
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the poems  touch me !!

on Mar. 14 2013 at 11:38 am
BrokenSoul5 GOLD, Lebanon, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
Sonny, true love is the greatest thing in the world-except for a nice MLT - mutton, lettuce, and tomato sandwich, where the mutton is nice and lean and the tomato is ripe [smacks his lips] they&#039;re so perky, I love that.<br /> ~Miracle Max

This poem is awesome. I love all the thought that was put into it. Poetry should be from the heart and this was. Thanks so much!

on Mar. 14 2013 at 2:58 am
pulledheartstring, San Jose, California
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Favorite Quote:
The weak can never forgive. Forgiveness is the attribute of the strong. -- Mahatma Gandhi

I'm not a big fan of rhyming, but I must admit your poem was pure and lovely. Thank you for sharing.