Goodbye, Summer | Teen Ink

Goodbye, Summer

September 10, 2013
By AJApril BRONZE, Midland, Michigan
AJApril BRONZE, Midland, Michigan
3 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
We all die: the goal isn't to live forever, it's to create something that will.


In the modest minty room
There was a dusty lamp
And a writer’s weepy tune
And a notebook
filled with rune after rune after rune

And there were several large books peeking through nooks
And two shiny postcards
And crumpled-up discards
And a half-drinken tea
And a little dead bee
And a pen and a note and a paper-hat boat
And a small, curly girl who sung softly as she wrote.

Goodbye room
Goodbye rune
Goodbye rune after rune after rune
Goodbye sleepy whispers
And writer’s weepy tune

Goodbye books
Goodbye nooks
Goodbye postcards
And goodbye discards

Goodbye tireless taxi
Et vale oris laxi
Goodbye tea
And goodbye Bee

Goodbye pen
And goodbye note
Goodbye everyone
Goodbye boat
And goodbye to the girl who sung as she wrote.

Goodbye empty sky
Goodbye light
Goodbye goodbye my city bright


The author's comments:
This is a piece about my time at the NYC Teen Ink summer writing program 2013. I copy-changed it from "Good night, Moon." It's sort of like an elegy for all the great times we had.

Susan, Blaire, Mary, or John- if you see this, I wanted to say it's me, AJ, and that I had a really great time this summer with all of you. Thanks for everything. <3

Similar Articles

JOIN THE DISCUSSION

This article has 4 comments.


AJApril BRONZE said...
on Apr. 19 2014 at 9:54 am
AJApril BRONZE, Midland, Michigan
3 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
We all die: the goal isn&#039;t to live forever, it&#039;s to create something that will.

Thank you, JRaye! Glad you liked it.

JRaye PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 18 2014 at 10:27 pm
JRaye PLATINUM, Dorr, Michigan
43 articles 10 photos 523 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;If you build your house far enough away from Trouble, then Trouble will never find you.&quot;<br /> <br /> &quot;Have you ever looked fear in the face and said, &#039;I just don&#039;t care.&#039;?&quot;

This is so great, just made me feel all warm and fuzzy inside :) The rhythm is so sweet, so loveable - beautiful poem:)

AJApril BRONZE said...
on Apr. 18 2014 at 9:57 am
AJApril BRONZE, Midland, Michigan
3 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
We all die: the goal isn&#039;t to live forever, it&#039;s to create something that will.

Thanks, Sunny! Will do.

on Apr. 18 2014 at 12:34 am
SunnyDreams BRONZE, Niger Falls, Other
1 article 0 photos 274 comments

Favorite Quote:
Can you feel what I have seen, when no one else has lived through what I have?-HalveOfLife

This is really Good April :) though could use a little something different in the begining,but other than that I really like it :)