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The Road

October 11, 2013
By Wontgiveup17 PLATINUM, Bloomington, Illinois
Wontgiveup17 PLATINUM, Bloomington, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
Life beats down and crushes the soul but art reminds you that you have one. -Stella Adler<br /> He who lives upon hope will die fasting.<br /> -Benjamin Franklin<br /> If you&#039;re absent during my struggle. Don&#039;t expect to be present during my success.


To the wife whose felt the blow of whiskey.
To the son who has to hide his face.
To the daughter who doesn't see her beauty.
All because they've been slaves to hate.

To the soldier who has risked his life.
To the man whose heart was torn.
To the woman who has lost her love
all because of war.

To the father who works day and night
just to make ends meet.
To the mother who goes to school
to help support her family.

Life is full of tribulations,
rough times and trials.
We just have to stop and take a breath
every once and a while.

It may be hard
through the road you're on
but hold on tight
and just stay strong.


The author's comments:
There are going to be times in life where it seems as if things are falling apart, but it's only preparing you for a greater future.

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on Jun. 5 2014 at 9:38 am
Wontgiveup17 PLATINUM, Bloomington, Illinois
23 articles 0 photos 32 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life beats down and crushes the soul but art reminds you that you have one. -Stella Adler<br /> He who lives upon hope will die fasting.<br /> -Benjamin Franklin<br /> If you&#039;re absent during my struggle. Don&#039;t expect to be present during my success.

Thank you so much and thank you for the feedback it is a big help

on May. 31 2014 at 12:24 pm
WinterRose76 SILVER, Ok., Florida
6 articles 6 photos 183 comments

Favorite Quote:
Arise and be all that you dream - Flyleaf

I love the message conveyed in this piece. It's refreshing to read uplifting poetry. I wish there was more of that on TI. There are a few meter issues - predominately in the third stanza. Other than that, I think it's a wonderful poem.