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Mistress Universe Poem

January 16, 2009
By Little_Singer SILVER, Wild Rose, Wisconsin
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"If" by Rudyard Kipling

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The moon is a pearl belonging to the Mistress of the Universe.
Her hair and eyes are filled with stars,
but the pendant she wears is the moon.
Her hair flows like a river,
Her complexion is perfectly pale.
Her dress the color of twilight purple,
Her lips the colors of the morn.
Her dress is made of dewdrops.
Her tears are poems unwritten,
Her tears are songs unsung,
Her tears are for the people,
Who die much too young.
Her earrings are made of starlight,
Her breath clouds of sweet mist,
Yet she longs to know love and has not yet been kissed.
Her smile is the rainbow,
Her sigh is a rainfall,
Her seat of clouds,
Her hair of sun,
But the pendant she wears is the moon.

© Alexandra B., Marblehead, MA

The author's comments:
I love to look outside on clear nights and just stare at the stars and the moon. for all my years I have felt a pull towards the sky and it's celestial beings. Now I finally gathered enough courage to write my feelings about it.
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thejoyofrediscovering GOLD said...
on Apr. 4 2010 at 4:58 pm
thejoyofrediscovering GOLD, Olney, Maryland
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"A bird does not sing because it has an answer. It sings because it has a song." - Maya Angelou

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Pretty cool. It got (and kept) my attention, and i mean that in the best way possible. Keep writing!
sunnyD said...
on Apr. 2 2009 at 12:31 am
This poem is amazing! It is very discriptive!
looly pop said...
on Apr. 1 2009 at 9:40 pm
lllllllllooooooooovvvvvvveeee

iittttttttttttttt

iiiiiitt iiiisss aauuuusssssooooooomeeeee
apple zap said...
on Mar. 30 2009 at 10:15 pm
i posatifly apsalootly llllllllllllooooooovvvvvveeeeee it
laker said...
on Feb. 17 2009 at 11:55 pm
i love it Olivia its a wonderful poem

and you rock at writing
golfer II said...
on Feb. 12 2009 at 4:17 am
Good job, Olivia! It is very romantic, practical, and on a high level. You're a poet!!!!!
lakecrain said...
on Feb. 11 2009 at 10:10 pm
your poem is making me burst with thoughts for other poems olivia i

lllllllooooooooovvvvvvvvvvveeeeeee

yyyyyyooooooouuuuuuuurrrrrrrrrrrrrrr

pppppppoooooooeeeeemmmmmmmm!!!!!!!!!!!!!
golfer said...
on Feb. 10 2009 at 1:49 pm
A person who feels like observing the night sky. It has a high level romantic bent. You are a poetic person.
alwayssayIloveu2 said...
on Feb. 10 2009 at 1:04 pm
I really enjoyed this piece. Sounds like you are drawn to nature. I hope you keep writing about what you see.
seagull said...
on Feb. 9 2009 at 6:36 pm
i think the poem is the best written poem



i have ever read
FinnCharley said...
on Feb. 8 2009 at 2:31 am
olive hey u gave me this poem to read on notebook paper and i told u i luved it and i really do. itz great being ur best friend. and u r the most amazingest riter ever. i luv u, bekah
Dalene R. said...
on Feb. 6 2009 at 7:10 pm
Olivia, you're writing is beautiful! I'm a friend of your grandmotgher, and I'll bet she's ver proud of you. Keep up the good work. You hav e lot of talent.
lynnie said...
on Feb. 6 2009 at 1:53 pm
Olivia, Your beautiful,thoughtful and creative poem is a reflection of the beautiful person you are.
volleyballrox said...
on Feb. 5 2009 at 12:32 pm
This Poem is in my opinion the best i've read so far!
Doc said...
on Feb. 5 2009 at 3:19 am
very romantic and innocent; keep writing with your heart and Gilbert Lake will shine :)
MarySunshine said...
on Feb. 4 2009 at 1:50 am
Very inspiring! High level writing.
elba said...
on Feb. 4 2009 at 12:42 am
I love your poem, its beautifully written and so descriptive...it could be a song.
choirteach said...
on Feb. 3 2009 at 2:05 pm
Great use of imagery. Amazing writing!
Skip-skip said...
on Feb. 2 2009 at 2:55 pm
Wow, Livy!! That poem is amazing!!! I love it!!!!!!
lakeside said...
on Feb. 2 2009 at 1:33 pm
The poem is a pearl. I enjoyed reading every word and will look out my window tonight and look upon the moon with new eyes. Thanks for the words!!!