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Break Away
January 25, 2009
You didn't used to be like this
You used to love and see
Thats the you that I miss
Than what you've become to be
All of a sudden it was my fault
You put on me this blame
I want it to come to a hault
But still you always call my name
It's funny how you're so aware
It hurts in all the words you say
It's funny how you pretend to care
It hurts me how you push away
Looking in your eyes
And they don't know what to say
I know you want to break my heart
So go ahead and break away
© Anonymous
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This article has 6 comments.
shamom said...
on Feb. 11 2009 at 7:26 pm
this is a great poem, i really like it!
darkmoon said...
on Feb. 9 2009 at 11:01 pm
wow!!!
i love it!!! the rythem was great
n the wording!!!
ive tryed n i cant quite get it but wow!!!
great job!!! i love it!!!
i love it!!! the rythem was great
n the wording!!!
ive tryed n i cant quite get it but wow!!!
great job!!! i love it!!!
anomalei said...
on Feb. 8 2009 at 3:47 pm
i believe 'hault' should be 'halt'. but that's okay.
i like the rhythm and rhyme scheme... trying something new is always good! (going from songs to poetry, trying a new type of poetry, etc etc.)
good job!
i like the rhythm and rhyme scheme... trying something new is always good! (going from songs to poetry, trying a new type of poetry, etc etc.)
good job!
[Poet]. said...
on Feb. 7 2009 at 2:42 am
Man i amlmost started crying after reading this poem...ITS WONDERFUL!
DevilChild99 said...
on Feb. 6 2009 at 2:23 pm
its good 5/5 stars
h57s31 said...
on Feb. 6 2009 at 1:27 pm
This poem is excellent. Considering this is a teenage author I am doubly impressed! Keep writing Kate!