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Broken Persona
March 20, 2009
In our lives, friends become distant memories that disappear into the abyss that is the darkness in our hearts. The rainbow, full of color, that is life becomes black and white. As this occurs we lose ourselves trying to remember who we once were. This unfortunately is when we are so far in the darkness there is literally no return, it's really unfortunate for those who are lost.
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This article has 11 comments.
elvinchangling55 SILVER said...
on Oct. 9 2009 at 7:21 am
totally!! could u please check out my poem 'otherwhere'. id love to get an opinion
Th3k!DWr!tE5 BRONZE said...
on Oct. 8 2009 at 9:24 pm
Thx, I guess this means I'm doing sumthin rite
elvinchangling55 SILVER said...
on Oct. 8 2009 at 12:53 pm
i love it!! i totally understand what u mean by losing ourselves trying to find out what we once were. great job!
Th3k!DWr!tE5 BRONZE said...
on Oct. 7 2009 at 8:07 pm
Good cause it'll knock ur sox off
AubreyTRieder PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 7 2009 at 6:17 am
ok gud cuz im xcited 2 see what u wrote nxt!
Th3k!DWr!tE5 BRONZE said...
on Oct. 6 2009 at 6:54 pm
Thx. I've written a lot however, it takes forever for them to approve my work and I have a good amount. But I will be posting more.
AubreyTRieder PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 6 2009 at 9:15 am
oh, and i forgot... the title is cool, too :D
AubreyTRieder PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 6 2009 at 9:13 am
thanks for ur post in my thread!
wow!!!!! this is so good!!!! I love how it's almost like a paragraph rather than a poem... i think it's so creative with the formatting! i also love your imagry! i think it's really hard to find good descriptions in poetry, and you managed! the feeling is also so realistic... when are you gonna write more?! u have a talent, man, so KEEP WRITING!!!!!!
wow!!!!! this is so good!!!! I love how it's almost like a paragraph rather than a poem... i think it's so creative with the formatting! i also love your imagry! i think it's really hard to find good descriptions in poetry, and you managed! the feeling is also so realistic... when are you gonna write more?! u have a talent, man, so KEEP WRITING!!!!!!
Jc said...
on May. 19 2009 at 5:18 am
Good job! I thought it waz great!
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