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Fianna and Dagwood--A Love Story

July 24, 2021
By Anonymous

Fianna and Dagwood are in love

That’s the start of a story

From long, long ago.

 

Fine baby, fine me,

and we can do whatever the spilling butterfly nets we want.

I will follow your bread dough heart.

You’re like a fresh croissant,

or seeing pink wind in the autumn heart trees.

Our names are burned deep into the trees,

the trees that cannot fall.

I am in your tree,

and I will not forget you,

Dagwood.

 

Pink wind blows in the autumn trees

Pink smoke from bonfires tickles the senses

Pink hearts are drifting in the air

Cool mellow air

Mellow fervor

Earth’s stillness waiting for winter’s blasts

Waiting in pink.

I laughed like a child among those trees

Running after you, to grab you and show you

My origami world I’d made just for you

I wanted to hand you a sky just like today

I wanted to give you myself.

For a while, our hands met in the trees,

Bounding in the leaves,

Then you cut loose and flew ahead,

Too fast, too far

My calls melted in the pink trees

Now ashy and black with dusky

I run, trip, wander,

Calling your name,

Fianna!

But I fear it’s too late.

Winter has come

Pink turned to brown, then white,

Never-ending white

Ice kisses

I call to tell you goodbye

As my spirit melts back into the trees,

Waiting.


The author's comments:

This is a piece told in Fianna's voice first and Dagwood's voice second. They are chasing each other through some remote autumn forest, him trying to catch her, but she turns herself into a bird and flies away from him. He becomes a tree so he can grow to reach her in the sky someday.

I know. Odd. On second thoughts, I just randomly came up with that explanation right now.


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on Aug. 13 2021 at 8:16 pm
SparrowSun ELITE, X, Vermont
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Favorite Quote:
"It Will Be Good." (complicated semi-spiritual emotional story.)

"Upon his bench the pieces lay
As if an artwork on display
Of gears and hands
And wire-thin bands
That glisten in dim candle play." -Janice T., Clockwork[love that poem, dont know why, im not steampunk]

im sorry ive been gone, i wont be back in the near future. my computer is broken, i cant do much. im actualloy having anxiety since i cant write.