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Lover or Foe?

November 25, 2009
By Irr3plac3abl3454 BRONZE, Brooklyn, New York
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It’s love alright,
So far, so close.
Gathering fights,
Soon to be foe.

My hand, your hand,
Held together.
So very grand,
It’s forever.

Will you be mine?
I feel it now.
This very rhyme,
The cat’s meow.

Now do you know?
Feelings, good, bad.
It’s sometime foul,
Yet also rad.

© Violet B., Phoenix, AZ

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Sort of like a Romeo and Juliet story poem.
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