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Falling Apart

December 21, 2009
By lovetowrite BRONZE, Brandon, Michigan
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A man who dares to waste one hour of time has not discovered the value of life. <br /> Charles Darwin

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Falling apart day by, day sometime's wishing i could fly away. To leave this world to be alone always wishing there was someone to hold. Im diffrent from others they dont understand what it feels like to not know were you stand. To have that one person feel so far away, to cry your self to sleep wishing it was a diffrent day. To feel so alone and hurt in side to just be built up, and crushed one more time. TO give out your heart to keep it from braking, when deep down in side your already fading. Friends i love you i give you my heart please keep it safe, and keep me from falling apart.

© Beth S., Marblehead, MA

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my friend's, and family inspired me to write all my poems, and stories.i
i hope any one who reads this will feel the pain, and love you must go through to be a teenager in love or heart broken.
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munkyman95 GOLD said...
on Apr. 30 2010 at 12:22 pm
munkyman95 GOLD, Medway, Other
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I liked the part about your heart already fading, it had a good rhythm too