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July 24, 2010
By StarCrossed2012 GOLD, New Port Richey, Florida
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StarCrossed2012 GOLD, New Port Richey, Florida
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"If you can't handle someone at their worst, you don't deserve them at their best"

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My mind races
My face is calm
My heart pounds
I seem serene
I can't breath
Like my smile?
My eyes burn
"Oh isn't that nice?"
What is real
And what you see
Just another mask for me
Reality and Illusion
Two sides of the same coin

© Becky F., Sacramento, CA

The author's comments:
Having to fake a break up is really hard. You have to lie to everyone you're close too, because if the wrong person finds out, the one person you love most in the world would be so hurt that you couldn't live with yourself. But what if the lie becomes truth?
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StarCrossed2012 GOLD said...
on Aug. 16 2010 at 3:22 pm
StarCrossed2012 GOLD, New Port Richey, Florida
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"If you can't handle someone at their worst, you don't deserve them at their best"

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I'd also like to mention that Mary K. and Kathryn R. are the same person. I was logged into my other account when I posted that reply to you Elsy. But the accounts belong to the same person. :D
Mary Kucerak BRONZE said...
on Aug. 16 2010 at 3:20 pm
Mary Kucerak BRONZE, New Port Richey, Florida
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Thank you very much, I certainly will. :D
_Mags_ SILVER said...
on Aug. 16 2010 at 3:01 pm
_Mags_ SILVER, Somewhere, North Carolina
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- I stare danger in the face and giggle<br /> - Never argue with an idiot, people might not know the difference<br /> -R.A.P (Retards Attempting Poetry)<br /> -Tip Cologne ryhmes with alone

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i love this poem, and the comment beside it acts like another one. This poem is very realatible, i may have never had a boyfriend but i am for some reason the one my friends come to for advice. You have a lot of talent :D

btw-if you get the chance can you check out some of my stuff?

KathrynR said...
on Aug. 14 2010 at 3:54 pm
Thank you so much. I really didn't expect any of these to get published, but thank you for taking the time to read this and comment.
Thesilentraven PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 14 2010 at 3:46 pm
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&quot;il piu nell&#039; uno,&quot; (according to Emerson, an Italian expression for beauty)<br /> <br /> &quot;Unable are the loved to die, for love is immortality&quot; ~Emily Dickinson<br /> <br /> &quot;The deeper that sorrow carves into your being, the more joy you can contain&quot; <br /> ~Kahlil Gibran

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I liked reading this poem, finding that it has a lot of meaning. But I didn't think it applied to faking a breakup when I read it. Writers and their readers often find different truths in a single piece. Well done with this.