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Always Yes

July 7, 2011
By Reader101 PLATINUM, Amarillo, Texas
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Reader101 PLATINUM, Amarillo, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;We&#039;re all pretty bizarre, some of us are just better at hiding it.&quot; -Andrew Clark(The Breakfast Club)<br /> <br /> &quot;Lack of format? Not possible in my opinion. Writing is an art, therefore you do you what you want.&quot; -b_gomez114

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When he walks in,
does he wrap his arms around your body?
When he looks at you,
does it look completely naughty?

Does he make your heart pound,
and your body tingle?
Does he change your mind,
when you just want to be single?

Will he dance to all your music,
while you sing along,
and grab your hand, and pull you in,
when he knows the words in the song?

Can he kiss you until your lips go numb.
while you sink into his embrace,
or make you feel as unique
as a yard of hand made lace?

Can nothing compare?
Will he always be best?
Forever and always,
Yes!

© Edwyn A., Chula Vista, CA

The author's comments:
I have an amazing boyfriend and every single one of these things is true I believe... I think that everyone has that person you're destined to be with and when you find that person, it will all fall into place, even if you argue sometimes. Even better he plays piano! I wish I could play the piano! But I play the cello so I can't complain! He plays with me... :) <3
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Regs_the_Shorty GOLD said...
on Aug. 17 2011 at 5:04 pm
Regs_the_Shorty GOLD, Frankfort, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
There are people who finish what they start and.....

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Hahahaha :)
Reader101 PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 17 2011 at 1:45 pm
Reader101 PLATINUM, Amarillo, Texas
42 articles 4 photos 135 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;We&#039;re all pretty bizarre, some of us are just better at hiding it.&quot; -Andrew Clark(The Breakfast Club)<br /> <br /> &quot;Lack of format? Not possible in my opinion. Writing is an art, therefore you do you what you want.&quot; -b_gomez114

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gracious amigo:)
Regs_the_Shorty GOLD said...
on Aug. 17 2011 at 1:39 pm
Regs_the_Shorty GOLD, Frankfort, Illinois
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There are people who finish what they start and.....

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Okk will do :)
Reader101 PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 17 2011 at 1:33 pm
Reader101 PLATINUM, Amarillo, Texas
42 articles 4 photos 135 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;We&#039;re all pretty bizarre, some of us are just better at hiding it.&quot; -Andrew Clark(The Breakfast Club)<br /> <br /> &quot;Lack of format? Not possible in my opinion. Writing is an art, therefore you do you what you want.&quot; -b_gomez114

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thanks:) heyy- read asylum? please:)
Regs_the_Shorty GOLD said...
on Aug. 17 2011 at 1:32 pm
Regs_the_Shorty GOLD, Frankfort, Illinois
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There are people who finish what they start and.....

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Extremely cute loved it :)
Reader101 PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 29 2011 at 9:20 am
Reader101 PLATINUM, Amarillo, Texas
42 articles 4 photos 135 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;We&#039;re all pretty bizarre, some of us are just better at hiding it.&quot; -Andrew Clark(The Breakfast Club)<br /> <br /> &quot;Lack of format? Not possible in my opinion. Writing is an art, therefore you do you what you want.&quot; -b_gomez114

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Well it's now complicated between us too....... :/

 

thanks:)

Cryswithaly SILVER said...
on Jul. 28 2011 at 7:48 pm
Cryswithaly SILVER, Kokomo, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
When I was 5 my mother told me the key to life is happiness. My teacher asked me what I wanted to be when I grew up. I wrote down happy. She said I didn&#039;t understand the assignment. I told her she didn&#039;t understand life.<br /> -John Lennon (Revised)

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I used to have a guy like that. It's complicate between us.

But this is sooo cute!:D

Reader101 PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 25 2011 at 8:32 am
Reader101 PLATINUM, Amarillo, Texas
42 articles 4 photos 135 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;We&#039;re all pretty bizarre, some of us are just better at hiding it.&quot; -Andrew Clark(The Breakfast Club)<br /> <br /> &quot;Lack of format? Not possible in my opinion. Writing is an art, therefore you do you what you want.&quot; -b_gomez114

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Thanks:) that was the part i wasnt sure about... it didnt sound right to me.. but i guess it turned out ok! :)
Reader101 PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 25 2011 at 8:31 am
Reader101 PLATINUM, Amarillo, Texas
42 articles 4 photos 135 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;We&#039;re all pretty bizarre, some of us are just better at hiding it.&quot; -Andrew Clark(The Breakfast Club)<br /> <br /> &quot;Lack of format? Not possible in my opinion. Writing is an art, therefore you do you what you want.&quot; -b_gomez114

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hahahahahahahha:))) <3
Reader101 PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 25 2011 at 8:31 am
Reader101 PLATINUM, Amarillo, Texas
42 articles 4 photos 135 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;We&#039;re all pretty bizarre, some of us are just better at hiding it.&quot; -Andrew Clark(The Breakfast Club)<br /> <br /> &quot;Lack of format? Not possible in my opinion. Writing is an art, therefore you do you what you want.&quot; -b_gomez114

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Well thank you... you got me blushing at least(im serious!)
ohheyyyelli SILVER said...
on Jul. 22 2011 at 1:51 pm
ohheyyyelli SILVER, Woonsocket, Rhode Island
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This is first off, too cute! You're lucky to have a boy friend like that[: My favorite part was "or make you feel as unique

as a yard of hand made lace?" Really like this one! Keep writing[:

 

.Izzy. BRONZE said...
on Jul. 22 2011 at 1:06 pm
.Izzy. BRONZE, Broadview Heights, Ohio
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Cute....I'm jealous!
Pngsaxin BRONZE said...
on Jul. 22 2011 at 9:31 am
Pngsaxin BRONZE, Houston, Texas
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Writing is awesome:)

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don't underestimate yourself. this poem is beyond great and the best poems come when you least expect them to
Reader101 PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 18 2011 at 8:47 am
Reader101 PLATINUM, Amarillo, Texas
42 articles 4 photos 135 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;We&#039;re all pretty bizarre, some of us are just better at hiding it.&quot; -Andrew Clark(The Breakfast Club)<br /> <br /> &quot;Lack of format? Not possible in my opinion. Writing is an art, therefore you do you what you want.&quot; -b_gomez114

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Thanks!:)

but im not THAT talented...

Reader101 PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 18 2011 at 8:45 am
Reader101 PLATINUM, Amarillo, Texas
42 articles 4 photos 135 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;We&#039;re all pretty bizarre, some of us are just better at hiding it.&quot; -Andrew Clark(The Breakfast Club)<br /> <br /> &quot;Lack of format? Not possible in my opinion. Writing is an art, therefore you do you what you want.&quot; -b_gomez114

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Thanks!:) im glad you liked it!:)
NinjaGirl BRONZE said...
on Jul. 12 2011 at 3:42 pm
NinjaGirl BRONZE, Valley City, North Dakota
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The only thing holding us back in life is our desire to stay where we are and not venture further.<br /> ~Some random person on the Internet :P

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I like the rhyme scheme and the way it flows. Could you comment on some of my stuff? I always like to get some feedback from talented writers :)
Mariam.J GOLD said...
on Jul. 12 2011 at 12:20 am
Mariam.J GOLD, Dubai, Other
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Favorite Quote:
I don&#039;t have many favourite quotes , though I do love the truth that &#039;change is constant .&#039;<br /> For you , a thousand times over - Hassan , The Kite Runner<br /> If you want to leave footprints in the sands of time , don&#039;t drag your feet - Rudyard Kipling

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A really cute poem.

Quite cliched, a litte bit.

But cute ( :

If you take it in the metaphoric sense, it's got a real good meaning ( :