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Grief

July 18, 2011
By Reader101 PLATINUM, Amarillo, Texas
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Reader101 PLATINUM, Amarillo, Texas
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&quot;We&#039;re all pretty bizarre, some of us are just better at hiding it.&quot; -Andrew Clark(The Breakfast Club)<br /> <br /> &quot;Lack of format? Not possible in my opinion. Writing is an art, therefore you do you what you want.&quot; -b_gomez114

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It makes me so sick,
just thinking about it.
I don't want any of this left,
not even a little bit.

When that day comes,
of no more pain and grief,
maybe the tears will stop flowing,
maybe i can catch up on my sleep.

I'm tired of it all,
of my life, and this place,
of people searching for secrets,
in my eyes, in my face.

I want it to leave,
I want it all gone,
forever and ever,
from now on and on.

Why do things have to happen?
Is my luck really that bad?
Will it ever get better?
"Probably not," makes me sad.

© Sandy H., Woodbridge, CT

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Reader101 PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 29 2011 at 9:22 am
Reader101 PLATINUM, Amarillo, Texas
42 articles 4 photos 135 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;We&#039;re all pretty bizarre, some of us are just better at hiding it.&quot; -Andrew Clark(The Breakfast Club)<br /> <br /> &quot;Lack of format? Not possible in my opinion. Writing is an art, therefore you do you what you want.&quot; -b_gomez114

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well thank you:)
Cryswithaly SILVER said...
on Jul. 28 2011 at 7:43 pm
Cryswithaly SILVER, Kokomo, Indiana
5 articles 1 photo 26 comments

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When I was 5 my mother told me the key to life is happiness. My teacher asked me what I wanted to be when I grew up. I wrote down happy. She said I didn&#039;t understand the assignment. I told her she didn&#039;t understand life.<br /> -John Lennon (Revised)

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You have ah_mazing work. Don't think you dont!!
Reader101 PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 25 2011 at 8:35 am
Reader101 PLATINUM, Amarillo, Texas
42 articles 4 photos 135 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;We&#039;re all pretty bizarre, some of us are just better at hiding it.&quot; -Andrew Clark(The Breakfast Club)<br /> <br /> &quot;Lack of format? Not possible in my opinion. Writing is an art, therefore you do you what you want.&quot; -b_gomez114

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Gracious friend! :)
Reader101 PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 25 2011 at 8:34 am
Reader101 PLATINUM, Amarillo, Texas
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&quot;We&#039;re all pretty bizarre, some of us are just better at hiding it.&quot; -Andrew Clark(The Breakfast Club)<br /> <br /> &quot;Lack of format? Not possible in my opinion. Writing is an art, therefore you do you what you want.&quot; -b_gomez114

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Yep... I understand that all too well!:)
Reader101 PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 25 2011 at 8:34 am
Reader101 PLATINUM, Amarillo, Texas
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&quot;We&#039;re all pretty bizarre, some of us are just better at hiding it.&quot; -Andrew Clark(The Breakfast Club)<br /> <br /> &quot;Lack of format? Not possible in my opinion. Writing is an art, therefore you do you what you want.&quot; -b_gomez114

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Thank you Thank you!
Reader101 PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 25 2011 at 8:33 am
Reader101 PLATINUM, Amarillo, Texas
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You make my day with all of your comments! :)
PaigeStreet PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 22 2011 at 5:18 pm
PaigeStreet PLATINUM, Juneau, Alaska
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poignant finishing line! this reads like song lyrics.
noblympic89 said...
on Jul. 22 2011 at 1:57 pm
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Wow you have a gift and you should keep writing, sometimes our words are the only things that really show our growth as a person
ohheyyyelli SILVER said...
on Jul. 22 2011 at 1:48 pm
ohheyyyelli SILVER, Woonsocket, Rhode Island
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For the most part I liked it. Some parts feel a little forced. "from now on and on"

"catch up on my sleep" They just slow down the flow a little bit. But overall I think it was good and even though there is a sad meaning, theres almost a tone of optimism in it, a sense of humour. Nice[:

.Izzy. BRONZE said...
on Jul. 22 2011 at 1:05 pm
.Izzy. BRONZE, Broadview Heights, Ohio
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You're a beautiful writer, I can tell just from this poem. (: I love it
Reader101 PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 22 2011 at 9:10 am
Reader101 PLATINUM, Amarillo, Texas
42 articles 4 photos 135 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;We&#039;re all pretty bizarre, some of us are just better at hiding it.&quot; -Andrew Clark(The Breakfast Club)<br /> <br /> &quot;Lack of format? Not possible in my opinion. Writing is an art, therefore you do you what you want.&quot; -b_gomez114

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Thanks! Yeah sometimes it's interesting to see the differences in something you believe will be alike!:) I'm glad you liked it too! :)
B.Diane SILVER said...
on Jul. 21 2011 at 3:33 pm
B.Diane SILVER, St. Louis, Missouri
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I love it. I wrote one called griever and its so cool to see the difference in the directions we went with the poems.